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WOW!

You startted this book out with a BANG! I was so shocked when Arlo has her crazy idea. She is so strong, one of my favorite characters. The plot was unsuspecting which I liked very much. You were so discriptive I practically felt like I was there with them. I definitely have to take some discrpitive pointers from you. I did notice minor grammerical errors. You seem to be missing some words here and there although I was still able to understand everything fully. Great job and I cannot wait to read what you in store for us in the upcoming chapters.

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When will there be an update to this series?

Great story! Love the erotic scenes.

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Great!

Me rooting for Damien and lelia to get back together 😭

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