Ravenette

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Keep it up

Thoroughly enjoyed the general flow of the narrative and the details. I do however feel as though the phrase ' there she goes', ' I love you more' and Nathan/ werewolf alpha mouthing off with empty threats became repetitive and boring. I'd also like to know more about how she's a demon. You hear she died as a child and she's Lilith's doppleganger but nothing else, it's an integral part of the story and should be included. Looking forward to the next part.

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I need more

I have binge read this and I think I have a problem, I'm addicted! Please please let there be a follow up (fingers are crossed until my knuckles are white)

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I need all of it!

I thoroughly enjoyed the first book and the plot still intrigues me, I'm eager to find out what's next. Keep up the good work :)

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Need more!

Hoping there's a sequel.

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Binged need more.

Keep em coming.

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Canny

Issues with spelling and grammatical errors throughout, however interesting story. I'd read a sequel to this.

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