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β€œMaybe I failed this time, but I’m not giving up.” - Hitoshi Shinso.

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Amen, Amen, and Amen

This. This is important. This is powerful, to me. The one about the Christian boy spoke to me, because I myself am a Christian. More people need to see this. It sickens me to see what this world has become - sexist, racist, and hating people who aren't like everybody else. There's this whole standard on who should like who, what is considered beautiful, or handsome, and how each person should be. That's not how we should be. We are a judgmental people, and that sickens me.

This needs more short stories. I feel that the more that's added to this collection, the more powerful it can be. Add personal stories, make stories that speak to what's wrong with our world.

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Overall, I Thought it was Good. Here's What I Think:

The story was pretty good. I liked how it flowed. Yes, it was a bit fast paced, but that's the style I write in. There were punctuations that I didn't see that would've made things flow a little better, and some sentences could've been written better. I didn't like how it ended, but that's because I always write my stories with a happy ending for personal reasons. But the ending made sense with the story. I personally think it would've been better without any language, but that's just me. Good job!

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