R. Gski

Writing is my outlet.

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Great Concept

The premise of this book is amazing. A very original idea, having Wyatt fight the system in a realistic, meaningful way. It makes it easier to relate to the characters. Having studied social work at one point and deciding against pursuing it after seeing the failures and loopholes of the system, I am excited to keep reading. Can't wait until you add more chapters. Keep up the great work!

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Amazing Read

Probably my favorite book to date on Inkitt. I would definitely recommend. So far, it's amazing. I love the buildup between the characters and the plot in this story. I can't wait to read more and see where it goes.

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Interesting so far!

This story has a fantastic plot that kept me interested so far. The punctuation can use some work, but it doesn't affect the flow of the story too much. I'll be following this one for future chapters! Great job!

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A smooth read

So, this typically isn't the kind of genre I read but I could NOT put it down once I started. The characters are amazing and well developed and you do a great job with the flow of your story. I literally check to see if there's a new chapter every couple days. I can't wait to continue reading!

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Great story

I loved the main idea behind this story. It was heart wrenching and empowering all at once. I like that the main character started gaining confidence as the story progressed. I hope you go back through and add more detail to everything. The group of friends were great characters. This is something I would read again when I have downtime. Great work!

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Ready for more!

I love the strength of your main Character, Adelia. It's hard to find a good, strong female lead and you nailed it with her so far. She is headstrong and compassionate. You make it very easy to dislike the Vizier. And after only 7 chapters, I'm already a sucker for Quinn. Great work!

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