Rhiannon

Wellington

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Great start!

You captured my interest very early on, which is always a huge positive. I wanted to keep reading and read the chapters that were available in one sitting. I can see the world that you're creating. I would love to see a little more description regarding your characters. For example, I have no idea what Lucy looks like! But otherwise you're doing a great job.

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Great story

Really enjoyed Gideon, although it seemed faster paced and less detailed than the others in the series. Gideon is one of my favourites

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