Riku Rozier

Just started writing recently. I am enjoying where it's taking me and always looking to improve. Thank you to everyone who has been reading my books

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Great story but a little confusing

The story was good. However, I felt some parts weren't explained clearly. So it left me confused in some parts of the story. The fight between Julian and Joey I thought could have more detail. I was disappointed in how quickly the fight ended. The timeline of the pregnancy was confusing. One moment, she's less than 4 months. The next, she's at the end of the pregnancy. I found some words that were missing and others I think that were not supposed to be there. Despite all this the character development was there. And the emotional connections between characters was clearly written. I hope your book get published becauae I think a lot of people will and have enjoyed reading this.

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