Riku_san

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Well enjoyable!

This is absolutely a fun read! The story flows very nicely, the author is quite good for pulling the readers in and making it immersive. The world is so well described and fleshed out it feels like the reader is actually there. The characters are well written and well rounded. The story was quite simple and easy to follow through, and I never felt lost for anything as the author explains this quite well in good details.

There were quite a few mistakes in grammar, though it wasn't anything too serious.

Overall I enjoyed the story and would recommend it to anyone who likes a fun fantasy. I wish tthe author well in future writings!

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Quite good!

By far, one of the good books I've read of this genre. I've enjoyed practically everything about this book from it's characters to the way in which the story itself had been constructed. The writing style, was the greatest part of the story, in my opinion. It provides a hook that baits the reader before catching them and never letting them go. The characters are all unique and extremely well-written, each one having an extra layer to them that makes them seem three-dimensional and more lively overall. Their humanity makes it easy to go along with the story and understand where each character's loyalty lies, what their personality is, and what their reasons are for doing the thing they do. It's plot is also one that I find quite engaging. I've read many books that attempt to accomplish the same goals this story has with their plot, taking place in a different genre's with a bit of romance and action. Most of those stories wind up being cliché in what might possibly be the worst way ever. Through, here, the reader gets to see/read the character growth. Everything about the story so makes it pretty memorable and easy to recall.

Anyway mistakes in grammar/spelling and such are seem as nothing major and don't distract from the story.

Overall this is a pretty good story and I'll recommend this to anyone who likes supernatural and fantasy!

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Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Well enjoyable!

This was a a fun read! The story reads through nicely, the author is quite good for pulling the readers in and making it immersive. The world is so well described and fleshed out it feels like the reader is actually there. The characters are well written and well rounded. The story was quite simple and easy to follow through, and I never felt lost for anything as the author explains this quite well in good details.

There were quite a few mistakes in grammar, though it wasn't anything too serious.

Overall I enjoyed the story and would recommend it to anyone who likes a fun fantasy. I wish tthe author well in future writings!

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