trisha herlihy

Kent

fiction, science fiction, art, life and er... stuff...

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Cove Review

Interesting way to look at the pointlessness of war, placing the action in futuristic space but still with the same outcomes as here on Earth. Strong characters and dialogue. 'Bolded' might need to be changed either to 'emboldened' or 'in bold', but well written and absorbing.

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Intriguing and Modern

The story is intriguing with its theme of youthful vanity looking for fame despite the homespun plain wisdom of his family. The draw of the bright lights and the big city are too much to resist with disastrous results. I would have liked to have read more about what happened at the party as it seems too big a leap to where he ends up but the writing style is well paced and the imagery is powerful with some haunting moments. A good read.

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