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I really like the plot of this story. It's what stood out to me the most. Reading the story itself I became more intrigued and the cliff hanger made me want to come back for more. I did get a little confused when Rem 'ran to Ryan's body', because it made me think she found him dead. I'm also really hoping that as the story progresses that we learn more about why Rem and her parents had a falling out.

I really look forward to reading more of this story since I'm a sucker for magic, mystical worlds and all that shit. This was a good start.

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