Rita Verma

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An interesting read

The plot is very gripping and had me hooked. Could not put the book down. Style of writing is informal and suitable for today's young people. A lot of editing is required to make the whole narrative crisper. What I found a little odd was that whatever one protagonist thought the other character articulated in the very same words, perhaps the language could have been changed to portray the same thoughts.
On the whole I enjoyed it very much and hope the author spins out more such gripping tales. A sequel perhaps?

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