Raspberry Lemonade

• Emily •

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AMAZING

This is like really good. I love it cause the plot is developing very well, and I can literally feel what Oakley is feeling, and I feel really glad that she has Olive and Halston to be by her side. I can also tell that Oakley might be having a crush on Halston, and I'm definitely cheering on that. I would totally recommend this to anyone, and I think it should be published, because it's awesome.

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Really good story

This is such a good story. I loved the fight scenes, it shows how strong Alexus is. I also like how you talk about his background through the story instead of directly saying it. Even though there are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, I can understand it perfectly and I would recommend it to anyone who wants a good short read.

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Shards of Ice and Frost

I love this style of writing, the poetic words. Even though I didn't quite understand the plot and what was happening, I really loved it and want to read more. The only thing I would recommend to change about is make it a little clearer to read.
Overall, I loved this story so far!

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Love it!

Wow. This is so well written, and I love the story's plot, how you make the events transition so well. The characters are cool, but I wish there was more of the story so I could see more of them. Please post more of it, I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Thought Provoking

Wow, I read this and really took it to heart. I thought it was relatable, you wrote what I was thinking, and thank you for shining a new light on life and making me think more deeply.

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Book of Ravens

Wow, this is.... no words. Intriguing and mystifying. The word play, rhyming, it all just clicks together to make something beautiful. I loved this! Keep writing amazing poetry like this!

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The Girl Who Smiles

Very motivating, I felt like I was inside the poem. I loved the words and the feelings behind them, and the title of the poem too, it made me wonder what it was about.

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...emotional

This was very emotional. A little fast-paced, but I would definitely love to see more of it. There a few grammar/spelling mistakes here and there, but I can understand it fine. A tip would be to add some more detail, or describing things more at length. However, keep writing!

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Senior year review

I like the style and idea, but the only thing I think you could change is the spelling and grammar. Some of the spelling mistakes makes it hard to read and understand what's going on, but other than that I think it's a great story. Keep writing!

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Emotional and intriguing

I love this story so far. It really got me sucked in, and I want to know more about what happens. Even though I don't have the same perspective as Ryden I feel like I can relate to him. The plot is pretty good, it shows how David is feeling about the note Ryden gives him and how he reacts, as well as how Ryden himself feels about the situation. I also like how the story gives an insight to his mind and what he's thinking. Please keep writing it!

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Psychic Review

This is so good so far. Even in the first chapter I was drawn in because of the plot and characters and what they can do. I was a little confused about the plot, maybe you could clear the story up a little by adding some more details about the characters' backstories. Overall, I think this story deserves to be published. Keep writing, Eryn

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