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☀ DO NOT SELF PROMOTE ☀ ‎‏‎‏‏‎Wattpad took down my stories due to them being too erotic. Guess they can't deal with bad bitches....

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THE TURN

Although I like the plot of the story so far, there are a few mistakes. Like the punctuation, for example. I think it would be better if there was quotation marks to point out the dialogue, and italics to point out the character's thoughts. Writing is hard work, and nobody is perfect when it comes to grammar, as there are a bunch of ways to write a story to make it unique. I feel like some paragraphs are really long, and for me it is harder to focus and understand the reading. Usually I think it would be better that each time you start a dialogue, to make a new paragraph for it.

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"Hey, Emma," I turned to look at West, his smile waking up the butterflies in my stomach, "How are you doing?"

"I'm good, West," I cleared my throat, feeling it clog up, "And you?"

"Nothing much, just missing you, is all." He averted his eyes, just as I saw the barest hint of a blush. He started fidgeting with his ID, never letting go of it. (keep explaining)

Nevertheless I really enjoyed reading it. I would definitely recommend it!

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Released

Although the story wasn't my type, I definitely enjoyed the way the author painted the scenes in my head. I would've enjoyed the first chapter to be split of into more chapters, to give off a better visual, but I still enjoyed it. It is very detailed, and I loved the way the reader had a clear vision of the main character's thoughts and feelings.

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How To Rob A Bad Guy

Okay, let me start by the summary. It is BOMB! After I finished reading it, it made me widen my eyes a little, and scroll down. I appreciate the 'Warning', before starting the story. Wish I could've done that before starting it. (let's just say I kinda triggered someone's panic attacks) The tittle of the first chapter made me giggle "The End". - Let me stop being silly and get serious. I love how detailed the writing is. It made me picture everything in my head perfectly. I liked how you shaped your dialogue. (I don't know why, but I'm kind of stern with that) Every time a different character spoke, you made a new paragraph. I really appreciate the neatness. Keep up the amazing work!

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Vixen

The summary was very well detailed. It didn't give away too much information regarding the story, which is perfect for stringing readers along to read. I really noticed the character development, once I indulged into reading it. As I read, I knew who Mrs. Addison was since I started reading. The dialogue is very well structured, which made it easier to understand conversations. The paragraphs aren't overly descriptive, but just enough for me to use my imagination while reading. I never lost interest. Great job!

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Remembering Annie

Let me just start by the tittle.... I like it very much because it ACTUALLY matches with the plot of the story, and one conflict - her trying to remember her past self. The summary drew me in to immediately start reading the first chapter. (in between you and me, I don't think I read it all..) I love the characters, and the scenes as they play out. There are very few grammar mistakes, but that doesn't compare overall. The plot had some good twists and turns. There are no boring moments, and the words just flow. It quickly introduces you to a world filled with vampires, werewolves, and fairies. This is definitely a must read!
[SPOILER: Alpha Isaac is my favorite so far. I really like how he puts Annie's needs before his own, including her happiness.]

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Who is Lucy?

First and foremost, the summary really drew me in. I'm enjoying the plot, although sometime I do feel upset at the challenges that the MC has to go through. This is my first time reading a story involving transgender characters and I didn't know I was going to enjoy it this much! I love the author's writing style, and grammar. It makes the story easier to understand if the writer knows what they are doing, and how they're doing it.

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Preserved In Ink

I think this was so far a really good book. The plot is good and the story overall is great. I enjoyed the writing style along with the small humor here and there. Keep up the awesome work!!!

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Caught By Cupid's Arrow

The summary drew me in, wanting to read more. Although it does have a few small grammar mistakes it doesn't bother me. I started reading the first chapter and I loved the author's writing style. How they chose their first scene to start at. The only thing that I would edit as soon as possible, is the way the paragraphs are. Like they are squeezed together, and it makes it a little hard to follow through, and to understand where each character starts speaking, and finishes.

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Autophobia

First of all, I really love the summary, but I feel like it's too long and it gives a few important stuff away. Although I really appreciate the 'Warning' chapter in the beginning, I think I'd be better to place the warning in the summary part, that way people read the summary along with disclaimers and such. But writing it on the first chapter is fine as well. I like it, it's not a turn off exactly. I liked the way the author started off by getting to know the main character and her panic attacks. It was a way of getting close to the character. A show, not a tell. I can kinda see how the story is being shaped little by little, which is a good sign of character development. (you could say I pay attention to small details, lol)

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My Slytherin Prince

I guess you could say I'm a fan of fan-fiction.... but not really of Harry Potter. (Don't judge me.) I absolutely loved it though!

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Rival Gangs

In the start, telling me the characters is a small turn off. I would love if you'd shown me the characters. What I mean is by naturally introducing the characters as the story slowly develops. I like the way you use the quotation marks ( " ) properly. I noticed some commas ( , ) and apostrophes ( ' ) missing, but other than that I can see the flow of where the story is headed. I like how the main character interacts with their friends, and how they bond. I really enjoyed the plot, and how the problem was introduced right away not stalling. Keep up the great work!

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When She Turned Seventeen

This story is amazing.. With the intro, it immediately had me captivated. I absolutely loved the intro! It had me unconsciously clicking the 'Next Chapter' button. Until I hit the last chapter. I was so sad that it was over. I would totally recommend this story.

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Imperfectly Beautiful

I love the plot of the story, however on the first chapter, I'd enjoy it a lot more if there was more of a show, rather than a tell. Other than that, the summary really drew me in to start reading, and even though English is not the author's first language, their punctuation and grammar is really good.

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