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Fantastic writing

This story immerses you in Senna's world immediately and it is complex and brilliant. The writing is fantastic and allows you to really live in the story rather than distracting you from it.
There's quite a bit of new terminology to adjust to, and I'm still not sure what all of it means but that might be down to a lack of familiarity with fae on my part.

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Fantastic concept

I really loved the concept of this story and the worlds that are laid out each feel distinct and original, I've never read anything like it.
The pacing, dialogue and punctuation/grammar could use a little work but seeing as it's only a second draft at this point they can be easily fixed!
I'm intrigued to see more from this world :)

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I can't wait to read more!

I'm only a few chapters in but I already love the story. The world that's been created around the main character is well established and the mysteries introduced have me wanting to know what happens next. The meet cute was absolutely perfect!
I'm going to make myself a cup of tea and continue on with Hleo - what a treat :)

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