RosaliaJerika

South Africa

Passionate writer with a love for languages and myths. I'm open for read / review requests but NOT for 18+ novels. My stories WON'T contain : ☆Adult content ☆Religious profanity/cursing

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Heartbreakingly Beautiful

This story, though intendedly confusing at first, is both heartwarming and heartwrenching at the same time. Through masterful writing, the author takes the reader along the journey of two nameless people and their struggle to find love and ultimately, each other, after losing so much. It has a touch of reality that compels the reader to keep reading, smiling, sighing and crying along with the characters.

Be prepared with loads of tissues :this story is guaranteed to make you cry in sadness and joy.

Brilliantly done!

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Worth the read!

This book has a mysterious quality about it that instantly grabs your attention. The ominous feeling throughout keeps you on the edge of your seat, eager to read more!

There are a few mistakes here and there but in all honesty, they are really minor mistakes and doesn't really affect the story. The author's writing style is captivating and delivers the story perfectly.

I'd definitely recommend it.

Good luck to the author, you've done an impressive job already! Keep it up!

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Thrilling horror!

The gore had me uncomfortable at times. But the tension kept me on the edge of my seat untill the end. Brilliantly spaced. Horrific and thrilling, this should not be read at night however, definitely recommend for the day ;)

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Worth the read!

Well written. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too serious. The plot is intriguing and the characters well developed. I enjoyed it. Worth the read!

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Okay, but has the potential for great!

This book still has a long way to go. The plot is intriguing and the story is nice.The character development is okay. The story's progress is at times a tad rushed but okay in general.

The grammar is not so good, though, specifically sentence structure. However, that can easily be fixed with an edit.

That said, I believe that this story has great potential. Don't put this book too deep in your 'to read' bookshelve.

Good luck to the author!

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Good!

I love the mysteriousness! It kept me on the edge of my seat. I'm curious to see what happens next. The only thing that's bothering me is all the religious profanity. Could you perhaps...use less of it?
In any case, I enjoy what I've read!

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