Rosalind

Just a girl living in a small town who buries her nose in books and fantasizes about romance. I write my own stories, occasionally: edit mostly. And I love swimming!! Message me for review swaps!!

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Awesome!

The beginning of this story was very captivating. I absolutely loved it. Could not put it down!! Great job!

There are some grammar mistakes but those are easy to fix with proofreading. Also, since it’s a book, I’ve seen you start a sentence with numbers. Although numbers are okay, I’m not sure if they’re suitable for starting a sentence.

But that’s all I can find. It has a great plot and I can’t wait to see where this will go!! Awesome story :)

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Amazing!!!

This book is a masterpiece! I love the plot and the way the characters are experiencing dimensions. At first, I wasn’t as developed into the story but now, I’m so hooked into the story. Can’t wait till it’s completed! Keep it up!👍

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Devil and Me

This is definitely a good read. I love how the characters are interacting with each other and they have a history to go off on, makes it more spicy :)

One thing I would add is that the characters are not developing exactly with each other. They just seem like an annoyed with each other couple. I would suggest to add some more emotion description in there.

But other than that, it’s a solid story. Can’t wait to find out the backstory of these two 🧐Keep up the good work!!

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Very Mysterious!

The first few chapters are very attention grabbing. It's like they know what's going on, but you don't know it; and you want to keep reading to find out. Very unique!
Also, I like how the story develop through 2 characters with a past to go off on, keeps the mystery going.
There are some minor grammar issues but that can be fixed easily. I really enjoyed reading this, keep it up!

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Interesting...

Wow, the descriptions are great! Good job! I could vividly picture the heat blaring down on him. The tiredness, combined with the desert's sun is very well written.

One thing I would add is I was somewhat confused at the part where he was very hot, walking in the desert then suddenly finding grass?? Unless it's just from his perspective and everything is unclear because of the heat.

But anyways, there's only one chapter so there's not much to say except it's a great start! Can't wait to see what happens with funny Rawl and strange Dyphan :)

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Suspenseful and Interesting

Wow I am intrigued. I really like the plot and I want to know where this is going. I like how some of the descriptions are also somewhat poetic. It keeps your story unique. Keep up the good work! I heard English is your second language and I just gotta say, congrats. This is an impressive story written with a language barrier. Awesome job!! Other than some grammatical errors, it’s a solid story. Can’t wait to read more!

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A-mazing!!!

Wow, this story is just amazing. I loved every single second of it. The plot is great and so is the storyline. Awesome job!! There are some minor grammar errors but otherwise it’s solid! I loved it :)

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Interesting Story

Ooo, the suspense... it’s a great start! I love the tension of this book.

One detail I would add is that there are some misspelled words and minor grammar mistakes.

But other than that it’s a real solid start. Keep it up!

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The One they Left Behind

I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work! I do wish to see some more character development and plot but maybe it’s because I haven’t gotten as far.

But other than that, it’s a great piece of work! Awesome job! :)

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Nice Introductions

I really liked the summary and the prologue. The introductions were nicely done. I’m liking each of your characters. Good job!

However, the introductions also may just be too long. I would suggest giving away some of the plot into those 4 chapters due to the fact that there’s no action...therefore, not as interesting.

But other than that, it was an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work!

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A Restart

I like where the story is going so far. Enjoying the plot and loving the characters😍❤️

I would suggest putting some time into editing as there are a lot of grammar mistakes. And I saw that it got better as the chapters went on.

Other than that, great job!! Can’t wait to read more :)

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Wonderful start!

This was an extremely entertaining read! I liked every single second of it. The plot is very catchy and the characters are very likeable, except maybe Helen😂😂

One thing I would add is to check your grammar, especially in the first chapter. There are no indents and it makes it hard to read. But as the chapters went on, it got better, so good job on that. :)

Other than that, it was a great start to a story with potential, congrats!

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Awesome start!!

This was definitely an interesting read. The grammar looks good and the plot is off to a solid start, can’t wait to see where this will go!

This is just me but I don’t like a story that begins with background. I like to figure out that by either characters or narration. And the plot was kinda confusing in chapter 2. Or maybe I’m just slow XD

But other than that, it’s a great start and I’m looking forward to see how this story will develop :) Great job!!

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Nice start

I thought the beginning of the book was very well described with a hint of where the plot was going. Since there’s only 4 chapters, there’s not much to go off of but just simply saying, nice start!!

I would suggest proofreading this because of the grammatical errors I’m seeing, such as missing indents and punctuations. Also, you may want to consider describing the characters more. I’m not really sure or just simply not aware of each character except maybe their names. Not feeling the development with alongside the character.

But other than that, I think that this story can grow into a great one! Great job!! :)

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Awesome!

Well, I gotta say, this was something I haven’t read before. A cocky jerk because someone took the spot of a swim team? Damn XD

I love how quick pace the plot is and each character, well, maybe except Alexander...for now. :)There are some minor grammar errors but other than that, it was quite an enjoyable read!! Keep up the good work!!

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Cute, Short, and Sweet

I really enjoyed reading this. Love the descriptions of each sentence, each character. Great job!!

There are some minor grammar errors but other than that, it’s a great story. Cute, short, and sweet. I liked how the characters were interacting with each other. Keep it up!! :)

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Great!!

Great read!! Love where it’s going so far :) Totally recommend it. Keep up the good work!!

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Nice start.

First of all, I gotta say the story was well planned. It’s nice to see how the plot is revealing itself little by little rather than just diving into the story. Great job on that!

However, as the story goes on, I find it harder and harder to stay attracted to the story. I believe the main character is not as interesting I thought he was. What I would suggest is to reveal some of his good traits too rather than just focus on the bad ones. There were also misspelled words that I would just suggest proofreading it since the story is already completed.

But other than that, I liked what I’ve read so far. Good job!

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Interesting read...

Wow. The beginning of the book completely caught my attention. I liked how the plot was unveiling itself. It was fanning out perfectly. Great job!!

One thing I would add is that from chapter 5 back, the paragraphs are very smushed. It makes it hard for me to read so I would suggest formatting like how you did with chapter 6.

Other than that, it’s a solid story. I’d love to keep reading. Keep up the good work!

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Nice start.

I like how the story is developing and reveling Damien as a character little by little. It's interesting to see his past blended it in with the present. Good job!

One thing I would suggest to add is to include some sort of cliffhanger towards the end of each chapter. I believe your story has potential but it also needs readers' interaction. Also, there are some grammar issues such as the period ending after the quotation mark. Some proofreading will fix that easily.

Otherwise, it was an interesting read. Keep it up!

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Nicely done!

This was an interesting read. The poetic part was very touching and emotional. I like it :)

Keep up the good work!

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Awesome!!

This book was definitely an interesting read. At the beginning there wasn’t as much plot included into it but as the timeline goes on, it only got better and better. Great job!!

There are some minor grammar mistakes that a easy proofread will fix. Otherwise, it’s a great book with a sense of humor twisted into romance and suspense. Keep it up!

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Nice start!

I gotta say, this story definitely has a kind of twist into it. It has just the right amount of action blended in with suspense and romance. Loved it :)

I was a little confused about when her flashbacks were occurring and when the real story was going. The signal is somewhat unclear. Also, there are a lot of extra spaces that are not needed in this story. But that's just a little problem.

Anyways, great job! I can't wait to see where this will go :)

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Awesome Start!

I loved the way you twisted destiny into this story. The plot and the development of this story is simply amazing! Great job! I'd love to see the two develop together :)

One thing I would add is that, there are not a lot of description in this book, or at least the start. I would suggest adding the setting (school, campus...etc.).

But other than that, great job! I'd love to keep reading :)

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Interesting start

I’ve only read the first few chapters and I gotta say it’s a great start! I especially loved the prologue!

One thing I would add is that this story is a little overly descriptive. It’s more like a narrative and essay of some kind rather than a story. I would suggest to add more emotional description rather than setting description. More interactions with the characters.

Other than that, it’s a solid start. Keep it up!

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The Scarlet Demon

This was a very well written book. I enjoyed reading it. I don't know much about Egyptian history but I can say that this book has some research put into it and I admire the effort! Keep it up!

There were a couple of minor grammatical errors but that can be fixed easily. The plot was sort of unclear to where I'm reading because I'm unsure what her main purpose is. But I'm willing to continue to see where that will go :)

Anyways, great job! And love your writing style, it's descriptive, vivid, and unique.

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Great start!!

This is definitely an interesting read. I like how the characters are developing with one another as the story progresses.

You say English is not your first language and I’m impressed with this book! It’s well written! Two things I would add: there are some missing spaces and extra indents in the story. Another thing is that try adding indents and quotation marks when the characters are talking.

Other than that, I really enjoyed reading this story. I like where this is going😁 Keep up the good work!!

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Wow...

The beginning was so sweet and innocent than suddenly she just gets murdered. You sure know how to keep the readers reading! Great job!

There were some minor grammar errors but it can be fixed easily. One other thing was that sometimes you use the word “I” as if it’s 1st person. I would probably suggest using her, she, or Cara because it looks like 3rd person writing. Other than that, it’s a solid story!! Keep it up!! :)

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Great Start!

I thought the plot was really cool. I love the action from every single chapter. Keep it up!

Two thing I would add is that the background is somewhat unclear; The beginning of the story had me confused. Another thing is the grammar. I’m unsure about the commas after the dialogue.

Overall, it’s a great start to an adventurous story. Good job!

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Broken Heart and Other Poems

I haven’t read anything like this before and I gotta say, it’s really well written. The emotions and feelings of each poem are very well expressed. Good job!

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Ruby Red

The descriptions are very vivid and the plot is off to a great start! The ending had my hairs standing on end😨

One thing I would add is to separate the paragraph to paragraphs.

Other than that, it’s a solid start! Great job!

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Gasp*

That was an interesting read...😨

I wonder if that box is something similar to Pandora’s box. From what I can see, it’s a great start! I wonder what’s going to happen with the four of them. The balance of the plot and suspense is great! Keep it up!

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Very Mysterious and Entertaining

This story is extremely well written. I feel as if I’m fully with the characters and I want to know what’s going on. The suspense and descriptions are great! Keep up the good work!!

One thing I would add is that some sentences, not all, just some minor sentences, are a tad bit long. It wouldn’t count as run ons but sometimes it doesn’t stick in my head. I don’t fully comprehend what you’re trying to express. Or maybe that just me. But otherwise, this story is awesome. Love the mystery and the relationship of the two that are developing. Can’t wait to read more :) Great job!!

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Loved it

The mix of drama and love and life is amazing. I couldn’t stop reading. And it’s not just an erotica, it has a backstory shins it which makes it more intriguing. Loved it!!🥵😍

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Great story!

This book is very well written, especially if you’re a fantasy fan. I would totally recommend it.

I loved how the sole mission of this book ties to the humor, keeps it serious but funny at the same time.

Also, the quotes really set the mood for each chapter, they’re well chosen and unique. Awesome job!!

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Awesome!!

I loved it!! Can’t say anything but loving where the story is going. The descriptions are vivid and clear; and your writing style is awesome! I love seeing character developments little by little each chapter, easing its way in. Makes me want to keep reading and find out where this relationship is going :)

One thing I would add is that there are some minor grammar problems like missing commas and extra spaces but otherwise it’s a solid story. I can’t wait until it’s completed!! Awesome job!

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Incredible!

Wow!! I fell in love with this story as soon as I started reading it. The description is vivid and I loved that the female protagonist as a mute. That was interesting and unique. Keep up the good work! I can’t wait for more updates :)

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Echo Mirror Jump

Well, it was definitely an interesting read. The description are all well written. I enjoyed it very much. The grammar looks great, there was no errors that I could find :)

I would add to possibly to include more information in the first chapter, A Summons. Maybe it's just me but I found it confusing. Otherwise, it was an awesome start with wonderful description.

I really like your writing style, it was unique and stylish. Keep up the good work!

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Our Cycle

Wow, this story was breathtaking. I loved the poetic lines of it and the dialogues of the two lovers. It's so innocent and sweet. Your writing style is terrific. I love it, can't wait to read more!

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Suspenseful and Hot

I loved reading this. The story has a great plot that can lead to multiple ends that keeps me thinking. The additional romance was addicting. I like how the character keeps having naughty thoughts and fights with herself. I would love to keep reading! Awesome job!

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Intriguing

I loved the plot. The suspense and the details were extremely well written. And I like how the story changes perspectives from time to time to reveal what actually happened to Arthur. It really grabs my attention, I want to keep reading. I want to know what happens next. You did an amazing job writing!

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