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The Archaeological Chronicles

Oh god!! This book is addicting.
If you are reading my review then let me tell you why this book was so addicting:

1.The chapters were small.
2. The grammar was flawless.
3. The plot was hooking.
4. The cover is attractive.

Loved this book. ^_^
Thank you for sharing such a great book with all of us!!

keep writing!! ^_^

Well the thing I loved the most was the way how Illumi has been described.
In every chapter I was looking forward to his description only.
But the problem is that I couldn't understand the story much as it was 18+.

Still I liked the description quality of the author.
Highly recommended if you understand 18+ stories.
Keep going on author!!
You are on the right path!^_^

Depressed souls

It is quite motivational and relatable. Perfect for depressed souls ^_^

Mind blowing :)

it is a wonderful story. But would be better if you keep updating it everyday as I am very excited to know what happens next :)

The Victorious Competitors

Hi there! And before you get offended, just wanted to let you now I am really sorry for being rude. It's just that I don't really tell many authors that their work have potential and I can really see it in your writing style. I can see how you can just reach a place with no bounds to your writing skills and how much of a chaos it can create with your talents.

I think the previous works' of yours that I read were simply amazing but this one can be better than what you did. To start with: (I did some analysis that can help your book become better and will make it as short as I can.)

Readers can be really tricky to understand sometimes and trust me that I know it. They tell you that there are some errors in your work but won''t clearly specify what you can improve. I don't want to be like that so I will be really frank with you.

1. As soon as I read your first chapter, for people like me who like cricket but don't really know the specific details and the depth, it can be quite confusing, though something with a lot of significance. Therefore, you can add it after chapter 1 or in chapter 1 with the introduction of the main character.

2. The initial chapter where you explained about cricket and all was quite boring for me cause I didn't really have to go into such depths I think. So, maybe you can cut it short and add things about how becoming a cricketer and also being one isn't really easy and add how there are many difficulties and expectations of the country that you don't wanna disappoint and all.

3. The chapters then were amazing but I think that your book has the potential to be made into a movie as there isn't really one on Virat Kohli, so I had prefer you to add some interesting elements which I think you can surely figure out.

And last but not the least, you can end some chapters in a bit of suspense to keep the readers intrigued.

I know that it might not be possible for you to make all these changes as your book is already complete but if you want you can do it and don't doubt your talent just because of a petty review of mine.

You have a lot of potential and I hope people can see it in your work so
Keep fighting!!! ^_^

Fables from India

India has been my one of my favourite countries to go to in my vacation and I really enjoyed to get to know more about India. The different storied were great and were just enough to fill my mind with positivity, high spirits and uncontrollable energy to do better in life.

However, I really hope that you can add the story of Vikram and Vetal. ^W^

Will be looking forward to your book and it was great ^_^

Lost in Maverine

It is quite a delightful piece to read if we consider the book's wonderful plot, it's detailed description and flawless grammar and it was quite enjoyable as well as the chapters were short and didn't bored me.

The story about a girl named Anne going to a Land named Maverine with a friend who's a scarecrow and her facing the obstacles in between of the journey themselves are some points quite intriguing but what I would like to suggest the author is that, that the things can take time and happen more naturally.

Sometimes it is possible that the authors might be so into writing the story or maybe out of ideas that the plot gets a bit abrupt. I felt the same in some parts. But I feel there is a lot of scope and potential for your book and If you revise your chapters a bit, than your book can be nothing less of a worth than a diamond.

Well just wanted to let you know that you might have to add more space between different paragraphs as they are jointed.

Anyways, Keep up the good work ^_^

Paired with the Bad Boy

The plot of the story was great. Just the grammar was a bit messed but this is a thing editors can hep us with.

Normally these things are ignored by me but as I thought it is a great story so I don't want the grammar to be a barrier between the story and the readers.

Good Job for your fist book. Keep it up!

Mysterious roommate.

It is a book that I am really looking forward to as it was very interesting. Haven't read the entire book yet but the plot is intriguing. I think it deserves more rating than what it has got.

Would highly recommend this book as this is something which has got me hooked.
Bye to whomsoever is reading my review as I really want to know what happens next. ^_^

A Touch Of Miracle

I really loved the story and would be updating my review when the book is completed.

In the first chapter the paragraphs were actually not separated properly. But no need to worry as you have to leave one more line. Even I faced such problems. The prologue was the best thing in the story. and then as for the names, I really loved them as they were rare not like the other stories.

So keep writing author ^_^

NEARLY NEW BEGINNINGS

I really loved your plot and your flawless grammar.

No offence. But then what I found the problem was that the chapters seemed confusing and long too maybe because of the heavy words you have used. Most of the meanings I didn't knew so I had to search them up and it made it time consuming.

So I would suggest you to reduce the number of heavy words and use a bit more simplified English so that any age children can read your book as you story has not only a lot of potential but has an extremely intriguing plot.

So I would love to highly recommend it to everyone.^_^

PARTNERS IN ARSON

I really loved the story.
First of all I really liked the way the writer has portrayed the nature of the characters. Then I would come to the plot which is very intriguing. (SPOILER ALERT: I really wanna know what happened to Ethan's parents and what will happen to his sister)

Then as for Amelia.... I really loved how cute she was. Means I could imagine how her reaction would be with her every dialogue.

The attachment between Ethan and his sister was very sweet too. And I.... just really loved the story a lot and will be looking forward for the updates. ^_^

CODEX MORTEM

well I actually loved the book but I really though that some sentences could be made more effective. Though not problem. It wasn't expected for me to read fantasy books as I am not really into it but the prologue go me interested and caught me up and to say the truth I really loved the way the poet has written this story.

Would edit it once completed and would look forward to more chapters.^_^

The mermaid and the boy

I really loved your grammar and punctuation and your prologue was actually caught my eye. I really found your book pretty interesting and impressive but still gave you a star less in plot and writing style as your story is not complete yet. So I would be editing it after it is completed.

Would be looking forward for your updates and would recommend this book warmly to everyone.^_^

Preserved in ink

Really loved this book. It has again encouraged me to watch high school dramas. But yup I would recommend some editing in some parts. But don't worry as you book is amazing.
It also shares some of experiences with me and has made me tumble down my chair because of laughing so hard.
Also it would be more easier if shorten up your chapter a bit. It is conditional. You can do it if you want.

But I would highly recommend it as good works should be shared with everyone. You can also think of publishing it as a really book. Who knows if you become fortunate.^_^

wow!

had an amazing time reading these 10 chapters of the book. would wait for updates. Loved the way things were described.^_^

Sharp

I really enjoyed this book but would have got a better experience reading this book if the chapters would have been small.

As sometimes there were some parts in the story which I skipped because I am pretty lazy kinda girl. Or else I loved this book. This is the first hybrid book on which I got hooked for such a long time.^_^

Highly recommended to everyone reading my review^_^

Nice start off ^_^

The quality of this author is formation of sentences. The sentences in this book are formed in such a way that they are both attractive and effective when the reader reads it.
My attention was highly grasped by the introduction and summary of the story.
But as the plot of the story is not clear yet, I would give it 4-star rating.
Looking forward to more chapter ^_^

MY SCANDALOUS LOVER

You guys know I am not actually into books which actually revolve around 18th or 19th century. But for this book, the case is different. I don't know how but somehow I found this book and started reading it. In the first chapter after reading the comments I was completely shocked as this is the first time that and 18th century book has hooked me up and that to so much.

The advantages of this book are:
1. The chapters are crisp and short.
2. the plot of the story is wonderful.
3. describing skills of author are good.
4. There are no grammar mistakes which makes it easy and more fun to read

So overall, I can say that this book is all-rounder.
In short, loved this book and would suggest you to read it too ^_^

amazing

I loved this poem as it was very motivational. Also I appreciate the poet for sharing her real life experience.

The thing that I loved the most was that this poem was short and sweet. It didn't consumed more than hardly 5 minutes of my spare time.
Also the poet has a good sense of rhyming words. or else in some poems you can observe the situation.
The poets try to rhyme words which are completely different from each other and makes no sense.

This poem was very sensible and I loved the way the poet conveyed her message. But would suggest her to use 'some' heavy words which will make her poem look more attractive.

But I really loved it and this poem deserves 5 stars from my point of view as it is hard to convert your real life experience into a good and sensible poem. ^_^

leave me

Oh god!!
The poem is unbelievably amazing. First of all the thing that I liked the most was the way she expressed a brother's love for her sister and the second thing which made it worth my review was the way the poet wrote this poem and the words which were used.

This poem has literally filled my eyes with tears as I can feel it. this poem's beauty was expressed very impressively and in short I have no specific words to define the extreme beauty which is being held by the poem.

Gabriel Tembo

I would strongly like to suggest this book to anyone who likes spy stuff. As I am not into that very much so I didn't enjoyed a lot but someone who likes to solve mystery then you have just found the right book to read. ^-^

SUGGESTION

I RATED YOUR STORY FOUR STARS BECAUSE I THINK YOU CAN MAKE YOUR STORY ORE INTERESTING BY ADDING TWISTS IN IT. NO OFFENSE. JUST A SUGGESTION.