roseblake7007

Love Land~♡

Hell-O! I am Anushka. I am 15 years old awkward and single potato *hides* I am crazy af and also weird. Have 5 besties and a brotato ♥ I am in LOVE with food and Books and MCU, Anime, HP and Talking.

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Good Try

So this was an overall good thing to read but you have many grammatical mistakes which you can fix. Some lines in the poem seemed to be forced just to make it rhyme. Poetry does NOT have ro rhyme. I like your writing style You must try to write one thT doesn't rhyme cause you are forcing words in. Well one linr I fell in love with 'Fire burns but they spark it' like Woah...keep it up this was amazing.

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Truth

This is the most truthful poem I have ever read.. It is just so real...The part of the coin was so amazing. Keep It Up!

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Oh My God

oh my god oh my god...I literaly ran around my house after reading this....This is so amazing....I have never read a poetry like this...there are some people who write epic poetries but this...oh god. You have magic inside you...every word felt like a person in my head speaking the lines with each and every emotion...wow...I love it. I would like to read more of your poetries you keep it up!

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Huge amount of EPICness

This book is great...I love how the characters' relationships are growing snd the character is developing...Romance is introduced well...Omg I can't wait for you to update. this story was amazing however there were some grammatical errors but that is not a big deal for me..This is still EPIC to me....I would surely recommend it.

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All well

Your narration is so amazing I can't get enough of it. People say show not tell and that is what I felt in some parts of it. Loved it and your writing styke is really different and unique and I love it. The way it proceeds to all its mystery elements. Wow. You did a good job to hook me up...Keep writing

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Good Story Telling...

It is hard to give a review of a story by just reading a single chapter because I don't know what's coming next. But girl you got me hooked from the first to the last sentence. The writing style is good, it would be better if you gave just a little more description about things happening and the character's feelings, that is important when you write in narrative view. I loved the overall plot of it. A really good approach and your story telling is awesome. I would love to see Audrey with Atlas but that's up to you, I haven't even read the second chapter. Just make sure it doesn't get confusing and give more details. You keep writing gurl, I see you with a bright future. Can't wait to read more.

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I FELL IN LOVE!

This book is just so DAMN well written I don't even know what to say...It was such an amazing read. I was crying, laughing, smiling like crazy, awing and all that. I was in love. I still am. This was just SO good. I couldn't get enough of it. I wanted more. I am so happy I chose your book to read. I read it in one sitting. YES!
Here are a few things I loved: The way you describe things, the way they flow like water on a marble floor like wow. The way you make us fall in love with the characters. Your writing style is so realistic and relatable....
Only one thing I wanted to say even tho I loved the main characters I would have liked to know a bit more about the side characters (ignoring the fact that all I wanted to read was them). YOU WRITE SO GOOD I SEE YOUR BRIGHT FUTURE. I was running around screaming after I finished this. I wish you a good luck. You are am amazing writer Leah.
LOVE YOU!

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This my dear...is...perfection...right here...

Honestly I have read so many fan fictions but never read something like this. This is just so amazing it keot me hooked, that is what ya gotta do...I tried so hard to find a mistake but no, you and your writing are hella perfect....keep this up.

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Relative describing is wow

This was the best description of things I have ever read. The way you compare them kike it shttered as glass and fish etc. The way you describe it by comparing it to other things is what I loved. The concept is amazing and it made me ask a few questions and got me hooked. Amazing keep it up.

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I am hooked...

First of I don't know anything about the Naruto and the fanfiction you are writing... I am just reading it as a single story not a fanfiction and boy I love this... This hooked me up. Well some parts were confusing and less described but everything else was so awesome. Keep it up!

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Deep....

The imagination you have is enough to build a whole new world which you already did. Oh god I was so into it. I love the fact that it focused on creatures. And your writing style, I felt like I was watching a movie when I was reading. It is that amazing. This was awesome. Keep writing. I would love to see more of you. Your imagination is wild and I love it!

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Unique

The fact I loved about your story was that it was unique. Everyone writes about bad boy and good girl. Me too. But I loved your new approach. The bond between the characters was awesome. Just describe things a little bit more. There is some attention needed on the grammar everything else is awesome. Amazing. Keep writing. I would love to read more.

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