Rose 🌹

Hot

Very steamy and sexy book for sure! While I feel this story is a little cliche, I appreciated seeing that the main character (Lauralie) is a strong female character. That is something different from the other Mafia stories that I've read. I understand that the story is continuing, however, I would like to see more emphasis on the character's backstories, to see how they came to be.

I also just noticed that you have fixed a lot of your grammar and wording in sentences, so kudos to you for doing that! The description has also improved and I thought it was easy to read. I had noticed a few grammar and wording errors, however, that's normal and they don't draw away from the story.

Overall it's a great book, with very interesting characters, and I can't wait to read what comes next!

Very well written

While I haven't read the entire story, I would have to say that it is a very well-written and though the out story. Very interesting storytelling and something I haven't read before, but that's a good thing! I would say there are times were I was a bit confused and would have to re-read parts, but take that with a grain of salt because I have a very short attention span. Very descriptive and engaging, the characters very well thought out and so is the story. Amazing job!

Captivating

So far there have only been 2 chapters posted, but I have found this story very engaging. I feel like it has taken a different approach than you're typical vampire story, it seems the main character is a guy, not a girl. Which I love! However, with that being said it's only the beginning of the story so it might take a turn. There is a few grammar errors but nothing too major to not be able to understand the story.
The story is very well structured, with interesting characters, a great plot, and easy to follow along, which I appreciate because I tend to lose focus when reading. ☺️
Overall I would recommend giving this a read!

Intriguing

I love how easy it is to follow the story. It's very well thought out! Good work! I would love to read the other books that you have written as well!