Very steamy and sexy book for sure! While I feel this story is a little cliche, I appreciated seeing that the main character (Lauralie) is a strong female character. That is something different from the other Mafia stories that I've read. I understand that the story is continuing, however, I would like to see more emphasis on the character's backstories, to see how they came to be.
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I also just noticed that you have fixed a lot of your grammar and wording in sentences, so kudos to you for doing that! The description has also improved and I thought it was easy to read. I had noticed a few grammar and wording errors, however, that's normal and they don't draw away from the story.
Overall it's a great book, with very interesting characters, and I can't wait to read what comes next!