Roxas7500

Somewhere in the US

Just a guy with autism who daydreams alot, so I'd thought I'd try writing my daydreams. FYI, I write my raw manuscripts here, so I update chapters frequently.

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Well Done

Well written story. A few grammatical mistakes here and there, but otherwise just fine. It was an interesting read

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A Great Read

Overall, this was a really great book. The summary was attention-drawing, and the plot kept me reading. The only thing I'd have to comment on would be the grammar. Tense-changes and grammar issues kept distracting me from the story. If those were to be corrected, I can easily see this selling on store shelves.

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Beautiful Story!

This is a must-read for any Sci-fi lovers! I myself am more of a Fantasy fan, but I was riveted to the screen the who time as I read this. There are some grammar and punctuation mistakes, but not so much as to take away from the story. Keep it up!

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Well Written

I normally just stick to fantasy, action, and adventure novels, but I will say that I enjoyed reading this romance novel, even though it's one of the three genres I generally stay away from. Keep it up.

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Enjoyable Read

Drama normally isn't my typical genre, but I must admit, I was riveted to the screen as I read this. Very well done.

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