Had me on my toes!
The Kingdom of Archer's First Book - I find the author's writing style beautiful for poems/prose. I could feel the immense emotion from the words as they were flying off my screen. It was something deeply felt, and am quite sure the author may have felt something similar his/herself to have described it so perfectly. The feeling of hopelessness, desperation, and most of all, depression. The plot was overall unique, the ending was to be expected since this is a part of a series. I love how it all came together, but it was slightly lengthy due to the double-perceptive writing. An advice would be for you to split each chapter into half, half in Lyric's perception, and the other half in Parker's. It won't seem too cluttered that way. More effort could go into editing the typos, as well as the overall format of the story because some of the punctuation and spacing were confusing. Other than that, this book had me overwhelmed with emotions. Looking forward to the next one, kudos ;)
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