RYKO

recommendations

Love the thumbnail!
Anyways to the point, I recommend that instead of doing this (Character name-) you should use quotation marks! (" ") There should also be a bit more narration so we can know the exact place and what else is going on, just having the characters speak is gonna throw some readers off, and make the reader disengaged. Love the story though! Thank you <3

Get it ig

Maybe make the story longer each chapter, about at least 200-700 words a chapter so we don't have to wait

everyday for one chapter, overall super good story uwu