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Interesting and cute 🥰

I like the plot it's intriguing and it got me hooked, like dude! Idk which one to root for would I go to team Collin? Liam? or Dave? 😱 I also like your writing style IDK but it reminds me of the high school drama script that our teachers used to give to us If you know what I'm talking about. 🙃🙂

I've noticed things that you might want to improve.

First: there are some grammar mistakes but don't worry it will get better in time and it still doesn't stop the story from being interesting to read. I suggest you install the Grammarly app.it would help you correct and improve your grammar and punctuation, it's a really good app I'm using it too. 😉

Second: the lack of using adjectives. I mean you introduce your characters you state their names but you didn't describe them. Like how they look; their facial structures, postures how tall are they, etc..try to illustrate your characters more, show/express their emotions more. By characterizing them it would help your readers to imagine them and would make them more realistic. Same with the surroundings try to further explain what's happening around. Again just described it like how you see it in your mind or how you imagine, this would make your story more relatable and realistic.

P.s Just continue what you are doing, just keep on writing because you have the talent and I hope this review helps. I know I'm definitely not perfect in writing and my story has flaws in it, but all I want to do is to share what I have learned from my journey in penning to others. 🥰🥰🥰

Beautiful

Great plot it got me hooked. I'm not familiar with the song that this was inspired by but I could tell it was a beautiful song. 🥰

I like how detailed you were when it comes to explaining what was happening and the way you described it was so lit! You made the words danced around to create wonderful verses. Keep doing what your doing you've got a wonderful mind and talent. 🥰🥰👍

P.s I hope this wasn't a short story though, I'm very much curious about what he will do to have the truth. 🥰

So sweet!!! 🥰🥰👍

This is a sweet shorty story and I loved it!!! 🥰🥰 yes, the ending was predictable but it still doesn't stop the story from bringing a smile to my face and made me squeal. 😆🥰🥰 I also like the way you (Author) made the protagonist a beautiful and strong woman in her own way. And the fact that the guy wasn't the typical good looking popular guy but just a "guy with a beautiful smile"😁🥰🥰🥰💕 Author keep doing what you're doing because you're awesome! 👍🥰

Love it🥰

Hi! So I finished reading the chapters up to the latest, and I must say I truly enjoy it. The plot was nice and intriguing, and I love the characters of both hero and heroine.🥰🥰🥰 I'm an all-time sucker of a feisty strong independent woman (heroine) and ruthless, cocky hero and I think you perfectly showed it to Evelyn and Adrian's characters. Love them both!! 😆🥰🥰 looking forward to how their story goes.🥰🥰🥰👍

I love it 🥰

I love the plot it is intriguing and at the same time realistic. I know there's Evangeline, James, and Sam here (in the real world) and can I just say that James was a true douchebag. I hate him that I wanted to prick his eyes lol. I also love the character of Evangeline how she fought for her kids and giving herself a chance to find happiness in life I'm so proud of her! 😁 and writer I must say you've got a nice writing style, I hope you will write more, maybe a little longer this time.
keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more. 🥰🥰🥰

Interesting

V being a badass is so surreal! 😱 anyway, I like the plot of this story it's nice and very much intriguing... Just a friendly advise try to use Grammarly keyboard it would help you to correct and improve your grammar. I'm using it too and it helps me a lot. Just keep on writing. 🥰

Unique

I love this novel, there was no dull moment while reading this. I liked how the writer brilliantly wrote this, which makes this unique among the other books I have read before. Keep that good work 👍😊

Great

I truly enjoyed reading this novel. The writer has made sure to keep the readers thrilled every chapter. I like all of the characters too. Can't wait for the next chapter. Just keep on writing, because you've got the talent. P.s I wish you'll write Holly her own story, I'd just love her 😊

Amazing

This book is amazing, I like the way the writer wrote it. You could feel all of the emotions it will surely move your heart. I'm looking forward to this story. :)