Salem Shabayta

《 A Place With No Name 》

I enjoy writing my novels about whatever idea I have in my head. I publish a chapter daily, active daily, put up polls daily, and I write every day, creating new novels for future publishing! 📚

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Love In Action

Hey there! I really enjoyed reading that book of yours! 🤩

I really enjoyed the characters and drama of this book! My favourite character is July! She's pretty cool and funny! I really liked her character and how she began becoming Jenna's friend! 😀

I was a little surprised when action came into the story, I didn't expect to see many intense chapters with Tom and Andy! For a humour / romance book, I think the genre's should've been "action / drama" or "action / romance"! It fits more, seeing as there is more action, with some humour in the book! 😅 But it's not a big deal! Just a minor detail to be careful choosing a genre! 😎👍

It was very mature of Jenna to choose Tom over Andy. Jenna gave Tom many and many chances to Andy, and he rejected her. Tom was better for her, since Tom always treated her right, while Andy hurt her. I couldn't like Andy's character that much... 😬😅 But there was some good in him! 😃

Also I was surprised when in one of the chapters, you mentioned pictures of Michael Jackson, since I am a huge Michael Jackson fan! 😂

I really enjoyed reading that book! Keep up the good work! 😊💟📚

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Special

Hey! I really enjoyed this book! 😆 Your book teaches a lot about introverts. How they're all human too and that they shouldn't be treated differently. There is nothing wrong about being an introvert. I really enjoyed that book and it was easy to follow. Nice work! 😃💙

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Creepy Dolls

Hey there! I enjoyed the short story! 😀

Its crazy how Ethan bought these dolls, and after everything that's been happening with these dolls, he didn't throw them away! But that battle of his was really good! The ending was a twist! 🤣💥

I also liked how you described how the dolls look like, the names, and what happened to them! It allows the readers to get interested in what happened to those dolls! 🤩

The story is very much understandable to read, and I think it was pretty neat! Nice short story! 😃💫

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