Sally Karsten Pace

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Retired and living in the NW suburbs of Chicago with my husband of 38 years!

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Nice story

I liked your story, but I wasn't sold on Sydney being still in high school. I know she was 18, but I think it would have been better if she were a fresh/soph in college. There was a lot going on at the end of the book and I hope some of my questions will be answered in Part 2. Will Dane and Violet face consequences for what they did? They need to pay! I was very sad that after all Conrad told Sydney to fight for, he decides to break her heart. I can't wait to find out how it all plays out. There were a few errors in your wording, but nothing really big. Good job!

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