Sam Cherry

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Great Story

I love this story so far, but it could use a lot of improvement overall. The repetitiveness of how the sentences start kinda irritated me, but other than that and a few grammatical mistakes, it was a great story. 👍

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Good...but it could be better

I feel like instead of a List, you could've turned it into a long paragraph that goes into great detail explaining the reasons. The list isn't really different reasons, but rather add-on's to the reasons before

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The time skips 😂😂

This is a great story, but it does seem a little strange at some parts, but the best part of this entire story has to be the time skips, every time I read them I laugh.

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