samhall217

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Ok story needs changes

This story has many grammar mistakes including: missing punctuation and miss-used capital letters. It has a great possible story line but needs lots more detail and descriptive language. I would rate this a 3.5-4 star overall IF he sorted out the problems in the stories grammar.

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