Darius Blake

Well then...

I am normally adverse to giving Anything full marks. There is always room for improvement. When told that they have achieved the most they can, people can become complacent and their work can stagnate.
But to mark this down just to motivate you to better yourself seems rather flawed. So instead I offer my most heartfelt congratulations and a word of advice;
Write as though your life depends on it. Because one day, it may well be words on paper that change the world for the better.

Please write more in this particular series. Maybe not following these characters, but certainly in the same universe.