Magicrealism

I love fiction and I can call myself fortunate for being able to teach it for a living. Inkitt is the place where I can experiment with writing rather than teaching.

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Interesting premise

The thing I admire the most about the writer's writing style is her capacity to economize. She manages to make perfect sense without burdening the reader with needless explanation. In other words, she can say so much using only a few words. The story has a nice flow to it and the characters are interesting. While the trope of the bad boy might seem a bit cliched, the writer managed to put her own unique spin on things. I specifically like the fact that her characters have flaws and are not amateurishly painted as perfect in every sense of the word. They are interesting and have quite the rich inner life. This writer is talented and I expect great things from her in the future. There are some punctuation problems, but they are not so major that they ruin the reading experience. I wish her the best of luck.

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Superb Writing

I like the story, the realistic portrayal of the characters and the interesting dialogue. Unlike other stories on Inkitt, this writer is careful to take the time to develop her plot. The pacing is great and it does not feel rushed. I have come to develop an appreciation for this skill after reading a number of stories on Inkitt whose writers are so eager to throw their characters into each other's way that it no longer seems realistic.
There are a number of punctuation mistakes here and there, but they are not major. I'm sure the writer will be able to pay attention to those in the future.
This is a story that I'm actually looking forward to reading more of.

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Quite Intriguing

The writer has a gift. The story is well-written, well-paced and the dialogue flows naturally. If you're looking for a well-written story with an interesting plot, this one is for you.

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A Rare Gem

This book is one of the rare gems on Inkitt. It's one of the few works I found here that were skillfully written. The characters are well-developed, the plot is engaging, and the writing style is superb. It is clear that so much time, care and thinking went into creating it. The mystery is complex enough to warrant engagement. The intrigue will have you sitting on the edge of your seat. I can't wait to read more.

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