sarah3534

London, UK

sarah3534

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Awesome story and talented writer

You are a very gifted writer. Your chapters were faultless, and I can’t wait to read more! I can offer only limited feedback, because I personally couldn’t find fault.

Chapters/plot: Your chapters flowed effortlessly, with interesting dialogue, interactions, and plot twists. Each word in every sentence had earned its place, and is a mark of a well polished story. You have a great prose, with just the write mix of exposition, and description.

Without giving too much away to your readers, your plot is unique and pulls you in from the first chapter. I came across no sections that made me want to skip ahead - you had me for the duration!

The only feedback I can offer is on the blurb. The blurb could be helped by removing the questions posed (surprised/feel fear) and allowing it to focus just on who the character is, the conflict, and the stakes.

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Wow

Just started this story and loving it. It grabs you straight away and you can’t help but be invested. I couldn’t fault anything.

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Wonderful period tale

I loved the vivid descriptions, pacing and immersion into early London life that this author provides. The story of extremely well written, and engaging. I can’t wait to read more!

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The Couch

Original plot and endearing romance. I can’t say enough how much this story is worth your time. The author’s humour is second to none and the main characters reactions had me laughing but were also on point and believable which only helps you immerse yourself even more in the unfolding story. Well done lovely x

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Visually stunning world building

I’ve just started this book and I’m already impressed with with authors ability to visually paint the scenery and bring the reader into their world. It’s done so effortlessly that it doesn’t hinder the flow of the chapters. I can’t wait to read more.

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Wow

This was such a beautiful first chapter. It was well written and really showed the vulnerability of first love in such a lovely way. Can’t wait to read more ...

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Utterly beautiful

This authors poetry is heartfelt and relatable and each chapter is unique from the one before it.

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