Sarah Finny

Hey! My name is Sarah and welcome to my profile! Comments, follows, and reviews are appreciated! Enjoy ♥️

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Great book!

I loved how the plot of this story was formed! It was unique, beautiful, and kept me on the edge of my seat throughout the entire book. This author is amazing and I hope that they will continue to write in the future. Great book!

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Good!

I really like the story so far. There are some grammar mistakes, as well as some punctuation mistakes, but they're easily fixed. Great story concept! I'm excited to see how this turns out!

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Watch the Dark

Amazing!! I can’t wait for the author to finish. It’s already a great story, and I can tell it’ll get better! I do have a few critiques, though.
There were some grammatical errors which made parts of the story hard to follow. Very few, and the mistakes were little. Parts of the plot seemed rushed while I was reading it (I thought the whole mate thing was introduced quite quickly) but in hindsight it worked out well with the story, and instead of a critique I suppose it should be a compliment!
This story had vivid characters, a great plot, and a hint of mystery to mix with the romance that made it all the better of a book.
Great work!! Author, keep up the good work!

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The First Her

I can honestly say that this series is one of my favorites on Inkitt. The plot is great and keeps you on the edge of your seat throughout the first book. In this second book, it's off to a great start. Amazing book! I look forward to more updates!

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Awesome job!

Love, love, love this book! Such a cute story. I love how the friendships intertwine, and the love story is great too! Some grammar and punctuation mistakes, like a forgotten comma or a sentence that doesn’t make sense, but they’re easy to fix!
Keep up the good work! 👏🏻👏🏻

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Great!

I love this story! The first chapter already hooks you in, and the author does a great job of showing what the character’s life is like, both with her family and without. I would say that the mistakes in grammar and punctuation made it hard to follow the story. Sometimes a comma isn’t where it should be, or sentences don’t make sense. I think that if the author went back and fixed these little things, the story would be even more amazing than it already is!
But other than that, the author is doing great! Keep up the good work! 👏🏻

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A CHANCE AT DESTINY

Amazing! I love this story so much! The author vividly creates a world that you can picture easily, and characters that are well thought out and enticing! The plot is amazing—the author kept me on the edge of my seat. I could find no flaws except for the fact that as I write this, the book is only 8 chapters long! I cannot wait for the rest of the book!

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AMAZING

This book is so incredible! The plot line is well-written and there are little to no mistakes throughout the entire book so far. The love story is so sweet and I love this book so much! I definitely reccomend

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AMAZING!!!

I loved this book!! The plot moved along at just the right pace, and the love story was one of the best I’ve read. At the start, I felt like it moves a little slow, but it definitely got better as the story went on. Keep on writing, author, you’ve got talent!

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The Alpha King’s Mate

The book is great!! I thought the storyline moves along at the right pace and makes it easier to follow. I will say there are grammar mistakes, which make the book harder to follow, but other than that this is a great book!
Keep up the good work!

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So amazing!

This book is so incredible!!! It’s thoughtful, funny, intellectual, and so romantic I had to shut my phone off to squeal a little. 😂 This book made me believe in love again, and that it is truly possibly to see past somebody’s skin and see they’re true self and still fall in love with them. This author is so amazing and is such a great writer, I praise you endlessly. Keep on writing! You’ve got talent!

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Pirates

Incredibly written, a story that you cannot put down. I finished this series in three days, a book a day, and I can say that, like Elizabeth, I lost myself in them. You felt as if you were right there, with the characters. I cannot wait to read this book again.

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Texting Him

I loved it! Great plot, and an amazing love story. It makes you believe in love again. The story is just overall fantastic and you immediately get hooked in the first chapter. Absolute loved it, and I totally recommend it to anyone.

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Yassss Lana!!

I thought the book was super good! The plot is amazing and the chapters leave you on the edge of your seat while waiting to see what is going to happen next! At the start, the punctuation wasn't great, but as the story goes on everything gets more and more awesome. Keep up the good work!

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A 👏🏻 MAZ 👏🏻 ING

My favorite werewolf novel by far! This book has a great plot, amazing characters, and drama that keeps you on the edge of your seat wondering what’s going to happen next. Honestly one of the best books overall that I’ve read!! Author, keep up the good work! I look forward to the rest of the book!

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