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Obey

I've only read the first four chapters and I'm really enjoying the story so far. I love how the author really paints the scene in detail, it's so easy to see it. The story is paced well and kept me wanting to read the next chapter, even though there are lots of characters I was able to keep up. I love that all the characters are very different in personalities and looks. I'm excited to see where the plot goes!

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Ray of Sunshine

I enjoyed reading this story even though it’s a little darker and heavier than what I normally read. The plot is good but I think more detail, about surroundings, clothes, etc, would be beneficial. There are a few flaws in grammar but for a writer writing in their second language it’s really good. Great job!

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