Firis Adams

Young lgbt+ author in the americas / loves sci-fi and horror / pronouns are ze/hir / Muslim

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Wow!

I'm in love with this writing style! As I'm not a fan of fantasy myself, I wasn't expecting too much from this- especially one about werewolves. But this was great! I'm only a few chapters in and I already know I'm going to love this. Keep writing! There are a few missing commas, but I'll overlook that :))

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I'm very picky

I'm a pretty picky and judgy person, especially when it comes to writing. This was great. I loved the idea and the words you used. The ideas you pictured were compelling and interesting. I personally am not a fan of much poetry unless it's ancient, but this was really good.

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Hey, this is pretty great!

Let me just tell you - I love an unhappy ending. For some reason, to me, they give the story more of a closure and end feeling to it. I am in love with the characters and the dark feeling of it!
It wasn't personally that scary for me, but I suppose I don't get scared easily, so don't worry about that.

For me, I love a bit of mystery when it comes to horror - the type of book that leaves me thinking, "what the actual hell did I just read'. This didn't have as much of that, but I found myself invested all the same! It's imaginative and I love your writing style! Keep working!

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Very nice!

I'm definitely intrigued by the story and I love your writing style! Keep up the good work :)

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This is interesting!

I'm enjoying your writing style and I can't wait for more :))

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Ah!!!!!!

I'm only on chapter two, but I'm already in love with this story. It's so creative and I absolutely adore your idea! Keep writing!

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Beautiful

Stunning in every way. Could not have said a single thing better myself.

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yes

The descriptions are immaculate, the story is intruiging, and the romace is quite interesting. Can't wait to find out more!

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Perfect in every way

Of course, I'm going to overrate it a tad. . .
because I'm the author. Obviously.

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Poetic Paradise: Review

The way you put words is very fun and smooth. It's fun to read and I've been enjoying it!
However, the plot is hard to follow due to the grammatical errors. I'd recommend working on that, but otherwise, keep writing!

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