Sam Ash

Eden

Hiya! My name is Sam. Or is it? Pen names are great. I’m the author of Shadow and Steel (S&S), among other works. Psalm 118:24 Always taking tea recs

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Good job!

Hiya!

This was a good beginning! One suggestion would be to start the story closer to the dingo encounter. This would up the tension right from the first page, and keep readers guessing. Other than that, nice job!

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