Rishika

Mystic Falls

🌿 Rishika sinha, 16 🌱 Sagittarius 🌡 24th November 2004 πŸƒ "Perfectly weird is unique..." Wattpad:- @SavySagittarius

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FABULOUS

AMAZING!
1) The cover is so awesome like istg I felt so drawn towards the book as I came across.
2) The title was intriguing too like WOW 'Kashima Yado' sounds so cool like really cool.
3) The blurb was just fine. Nothing else to say Just FINE... PERFECTLY FINE
4) I totally love the book... What is your brain made off, how do u develop such amazing story? Like how? How? ITS SO MIND BLOWING!!!
The action, the emotion, the settings, the description everything is so perfect...
FABULOUS JUST FABULOUS
KEEP WRITING!!!
I LOVE THE STORIES!!!

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Nice

The story was honestly good, and your grammar was better than mine I agree but please don't mind me but your cover is really not something which could attract readers, I know they say 'don't judge a book by its cover' but honestly we all judge a book by its cover, and also I felt the storyline/plot is rushed. I mean you could slow down, add a few more descriptions? More of talks, moments, scenes. It was just a bit rushed. Other than that, it was amazing! Keep writing!

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beautiful

Idk if i found any mistakes coz i got addicted. I myself suffer from these shit and its kinda helps lol. I absolutely love your poems. Keep writing!

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Amazing

It was amazing. The flow and story was interesting. The cover was interesting in itself too. Though the grammar could be enhanced but you could do it with editing it again. Overall, your gonna rock. Keep writing amazing stories.

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great

The story was awesome, the perfect definition of erotic fiction. Keep writing

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WONDERFUL

The story overall was really awesome and addictive. I couldn't leave reading and was so engrossed in it that in some places I also forgot to comment, sorry about that. I did find a few spelling mistakes and changes in tenses but that is fine, my book is worse in this. Overall I loved it, enjoyed reading it. Keep writing and all the best. It worth reading.

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Wonderful

Wonderful work. Everything is perfect but I found that instead of And you used An In many places. Thats the only mistake I found. Overall I am addicted keeping writing such Stories all the best.

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Amazing

It was fabulous, I love how it went and had a unexpected twist at the end of it. Good one!

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Worth Reading

I loved it, very intriguing and addictive. You know how to grip the attention of any reader. Only issue was the grammar and spelling in few places. A thorough go through and editing will be good. You mixed up tenses in few places. Thats all. Other than that, it was a very nice story. Keep writing! Good luck

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Oml Awesome

Gosh! I got hooked by reding the first chapter itself. It was really good and flow of plot and emotions were my god so awesome. Keep writing

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His Love

beautifully written, even though spelling errors were present but the beauty of your writing hid it well. The message of life and love was beautifully showcased. Very well written.

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The Bad Boy and The Angel

awesome, just awesome. It was short but surprising, specially the ending. Something readers wouldnt predict. Really good. though some errors was there but chill i have more than you. Keep writingg

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mate protect me

The story is fabulous, just awesome. Very interesting and addictive, it has the ability of stopping a reader to do other works and jump into the story and finish. Just a few errors here and there but it doesnt matter as other stuff is perfect. Keep updating

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The Green Grass Fox

AWESOME! I loved the story and its a worth reading. The plot, description, twists and turns, there were parts where you literally surprised me! It was great, though at some places there were few spelling errors but thats fine, people usually over look that. Keep it up!

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HIM

I loving the plot and the way it's going just a little mistake that is keeping 'I' in caps. In many places you kept I in small letters as in 'i'. So thats the only mistake I found so just letting you know. I hope you don't mind.

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Blood Moon Rising

I absolutely love the cover, very attractive and tempting as well as the title. It's just great. The plot, character development as i read in the first few chapters is just awesome. (Sorry am a silent reader so couldn't Comment). The intro was very creative. I also love the way you interact with your readers, it shows how down to earth you are! And overall it's very intriguing. All the best!

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