Sayuri_6_7_2000

Seoul,South Korea

Word_Addict Cliche woman Runs wild in imagination

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Amazing!!!

I finally finished reading your story. I was very confused at first not being able to follow what is who n where. But i waited patiently and it was a treat. I loved how you descriptively wrote the chapters and scenarios, but if you would like to make it short that will be really grate. I was hooked pretty well. You put really good punch lines in between hats off for that. the plot proceeded slowly, but that is your writing style. Overall i liked it better than most of the books. Good, grammar was good too. I need to take lessons from you on that. ;-) ;-) Overall a good pacakge!!.

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