Emotional Web
Rating from the prologue to your first chapter, I'd say that was one dizzy rollercoaster for my heart and it caught me off-guard to have the characters right in the middle of a dilemma. Interesting enough, the prologue was unique and detailed, although a hint or two of the main characters could add the cherry on top. There were silent punctuation errors, however it is minor, so you don't have to worry much. The grammar had quality which lead me to definitely think of your potentials. The visual imagery was vivid and clear that I could make it out well. It quiet intrigued me of how you've got the word "Love" all wrapped up in a package nicely for us readers to contemplate about. I've gone to your Wattpad page and it looked like this book has caught the imaginative minds of many readers. To swiftly comment on characters, the build up, which I'm looking forward too, excited me when I noticed your choice of names; reminding me of the genre you've chosen and how they fit well with its seductive atmosphere. Rather spicy and elegant. The awaiting chapters will keep me on my toes for sure. Keep it up! ;)
- S.W.
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