Scarlet Winters

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Intriguing!

Loving the story so far! The emotions of the characters are beautifully described and you've a nice writing style! However, there are punctuation errors and some sentence framing mistakes but I've already told about that in comments in where to and what and just little editing will do it. Besides all that,your story is interesting!
Ps: Keep writing! Can't wait to know more! 😄

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Mind Blowing❤❤❤

Even though we've found each other through groups, I must say, That was an amazing book!!! At first I didn't know that Japanese setting books would be that interesting (tbh I had never read any earlier). But this one made me feel as if I was actually there, experiencing it all. You did a great job with mental visualization! I got lost with the characters, became invested in their journey and experienced their emotional ups and downs along with them. Although I found some punctuational errors, they do not stop me from giving you an almost 5 star. Hats off author!❤

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Good so far!

To be honest, I loved the plot and twists of the story. You've given the readers mixed emotions as sad as well as happy for Y/N at the same time. Seems like a lot of drama going to happen in there. The book is going good as of yet but it will be all the more better if you give it a re-read and editing and I've already mentioned in the comments about where and about the punctuation and some words. Besides that, You are a great writer and do not stop! 🤗

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Enjoyed! 💕

Really enjoyed this little story! It had suspense all the time. I admire your writing style. It was descriptive and had a nice mental visuality power. Although, if I could give a suggestion, I'd like to say that I found the usage of 'I' in several sentences at the start. Like, " I didn't want to look like her twin, so I told her I was wearing the sleek blue satin number I had worn" instead of which you could write, "Not wanting to look like her twin, I told her I'd be wearing the sleek blue satin number I had worn." Other than that, it was all good! 👍💕

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Amazed

A very intriguing story! The plot and the storyline is just as amazing as it could be! Keep it up. It's just the little of grammar that has kept me from giving you 5 stars. Correct those and it's all yours. Just like at some places 'I' instead of 'i'(capitalization), few misspelt words and punctuations. I'd just want you to go through, edit and there you go, author! Update soon coz you have me hooked already! Definitely reading more! ❤❤❤

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Good job 👍

Well, Going great so far with a unique plot of blood season. At first, when I had read the name of the book, I didn't think it would mean bleeding. To be honest, seemed like it would be based on a war or a bloodbath like that. This is what makes it a unique creativity of mind and originality. However, you need to look at some spelling errors in the chapters, like in chapter 3, about Damian's 'kind' and in chapter 5 about the purebred 'dark' demon. I'd like to recommend you 'Grammarly' on your browser as its a great help with minor errors and typos like that. Otherwise, the story is going great with the short detailed chapters yet coping with the information to be disclosed enough to get readers hooked with. Good job author! 🤗

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Keep it up!

Although you need to check on some missing words in sentences and minor spelling errors in the story, the plot is just as amazing as it can be. I'm sure you're going to get better and better. Really liked your writing style as well! Keep it up author! ❤

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Going great!

Thatt was an ab-so-lute-ly amazingg start! Those exaggerated thoughts of the guy were just hilarious. It's hard for someone to get me hooked with the very first chapter and here you go author, Goodjob! Although, you need to just check on a little bit of punctuation errors here and there buh otherwise going great! Please update soon! 🤩

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Interesting

That was really a great start and the plot just got me! That was emotional and heartbreaking and yeah she definitely deserves a second chance. Must be alot of drama in there though. Really got me hooked and I'm going to read it for sure. Also you could've made it Mrs Walkers rather than miss because she was married right? Anyhow with that beginning, the book is going to be absolutely amazing.

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Hooked

That was an interesting chapter and I'm adding it to my reading list already.That was pretty much emotional at the start about her mother :(. Well, about the punctuations, you can just put " for dialogues and also have a grammar check at places. Take it as constructive criticism. So far so good. 😁

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Keep it up

The plot is really good and I loved your writing style.Looking forward to read your book already!Reading the very first chapter itself got my interest and also easy to understand. Keep up the great work and you can give the details of expression as well and that will get readers hooked up. Other wise it's amazing.

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Keep it up

The plot is really good and I loved your writing style.Looking forward to read your book already!Reading the very first chapter itself got my interest and also easy to understand. Keep up the great work and you can give the details of expression as well and that will get readers hooked up. Other wise it's amazing.

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Interesting

Already added your book to my reading list! The plot is really interesting and going great so far.I've read the first chapter and already hooked to it.There must be alot of drama going to be in the future.Hoping you give out more of their expressions in detail and also about their appearances.Just look on the punctuations at some places and it will go well.👍😊

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Good start

I must say I loved your writing style!the way you portrayed the words was superb. I was confused at the start if they are conjoined but caught on later on.Loved the plot and story looking forward to read more. Keep up the great work👍

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Keep it up

This is my first thriller .Did like it so far.It left me interested. Good work.Plus loved about the grammar part as I'm a grammar nazi 🙊

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Nice

It was nice but Aaorn didn't have to die...He didn't deserve that life..he should've had a second chance after memory loss!After all i loved the characters..Mom shouldn't have died 🥺

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