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Action packed

Sci fi isn't my thing, but now it is because of this explosive read. When Dapharoah69 asked me to read his vampire book boy I was in for a treat. I love Kleopha Achieng, the fiercest most opinionated vampire I've ever encountered. The story line is originally different. There are very few curse words, but nothing vulgar. He writes poetically. I especially love the Stained Glass chapter. His attention to detail is astounding. I was held captive throughout it all. I must say that the action scenes are amazing. I was on the edge of my seat. I highly recommend this book. I hope (fingers crossed) that he writes book 2 and I think he just might because the story ended on a cliffhanger. . One of my favorite parts is below:

I now ponder a saddened sunset because I had to say good night to a squirming mortal, incarcerated by my granite arms; the one that pushes against the force of oppression.

His fingernails scratched at the hard surface of my skin and not leaving a mark, his fingers and open palms pushing at them, and not so much as a fingerprint was recorded, for my skin was too magnificent for human comprehension.

Without further ado, as the arrogant ones say these days, I cautiously sink my fangs into his thick neck, filled with eye-popping veins, this Mortal, a coward, if ye asked me, a few minutes away from meeting his Maker, or seeing if there really was one.

While he fights for his life, trying with all he could muster to twist his body, spitting at me, and cursing, writing his own crucifixion and execution with the dirty words formed from a banned-from-Heaven tongue, I had the power to turn him into an Immortal, if I so choose to.

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Better than the first

High caliber writing. Part one was amazing. It set the tone for part 2. I love the attention to detail. Every page played out in my head. The Village of Opus story with Zulu, Chanteuse and Kleopha is unlike anything Ive ever read. There are no page fillers. The story ebb and flows. If sex sells, then this eill soar. The love making is tastefully done. The Law of Beasts: The Mark gets 2 thumbs up.

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Everything!

What's not to love about my brother's story. Each installment is better than the last. Even though it's a work in progress, what I've read so far is epic!

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