Axal

Wow...

I've managed to read only one chapter of this story and i got to say i can feel the emotions you put here in this story, the sadness, the anger, the depression, and loneliness...those emotions i thought i had buried inside me after three years came flooding back. You have shown a lot of potential here keep it up

It's Really Interesting

I've read only a few short chapters and i gotta say it's actually really good, the dialogue feels realistic and sometimes down right funny, i may have a long way to go but keep it up man

Suffer Little Children

Ok I've read a good chunk of these 3 to four chapters and as much as i think it's an okay book, with it's dark elements and feeling of sympathy...To be it's kind of disturbing, in a good way like you would watch in a horror movie (didn't make much since now i said it out loud but anyways) keep it up

Pandora's wake: The Normad Chronicles BK2

So far i'm only on the first chapter, even though it's an interesting so far as i red it's a military group fighting a parallel alien dimension or something along the lines, and the way it's presented it's pretty interesting.

A good start

I'm reading the prologue right now, and i'll say this...I'm impressed, the way it was written to me felt dark yet mysterious, so far it's a bit convoluted for me to understand (Then again i'm at the beginning stage of the story) But it's still worth a recommendation

It's interesting

I've read a good chunk of this story, and read over it again til i finally get the jest of it. I like the way it's presented like something out of a diary or a journal entry, While it's not my favorite story ever, i would still put it up as a recommended story for other viewers to read :)

Holy...Shit

Goddamn, this, god i don't even know what to say. This here is heartbreaking and dark and it shows the character of Jason's semi-broken mentality Christ nice job on this

Nice

While myself i'm not a big fan of Young Justice, this what you wrote here shows off the good writing and darker elements the show had it's pretty good