Excitement in a heartbeat!
Quick-paced, well organized, and a unique writing style. I don't know much about the gangster world so this read is eye-opening and quite interesting. The author's attention to detail is impressive. The first chapter vividly described a distorted family living in fear and danger. There was no need to exaggerate the abuse flowing between the family members, because the relationship by nature is toxic.
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I highly appreciate the cunning, honest, and slightly sarcastic tone the author possesses. We already know this will be a dark story, then why not toss some dark humor and cynical comments in to spice it up?
I'm definitely excited to see how things unfold! So far the characters are strong and the protagonist seems to have plenty or room for development. Keep up the good work!