Selene Flash

Oh. My. Gods.

This was truly awesome. Like, really, really awesome. I love novels like this, and Sense And Sensuality was one of the best I've read in a while. Raine is a beautiful character, and I'm really looking forward to more of this story. The dialogue was a little too old fashioned and aristocratic for my taste; the characters sound like their from the 18th century most of the time rather than the 20th/21st. Other than that, this was AMAZING.

You & Me (Or Something Like That)

Overall, this story was beautiful, except some parts were a little confusing, especially the last chapter, where the story jumps into a scene without introducing anything about it, but that may have something to do with the fact that there was nothing in the chapter before, at least, not that I could see. There were a few other chapters that were blank as well. One last thing that I think should be easier to understand is the last scene with Basile and Cody. For me, it seemed a little random, so I think the character's perspectives should be introduced a little earlier in the story, unless that scene was put there in order to introduce something in the future.
Beautiful story, and thank you.

THIS WAS SO AWESOME.

I was completely blown away by this story. The characters and plot and style are perfect; I couldn't get enough of this! I really can't wait for the next book; this one was so amazing. If this were published, I would absolutely buy a copy. The one bone to pick I have with this is the numerous grammatical errors, but this tale glows so bright as to completely wash them out. I think the title doesn't do the story very much justice, especially since the majority of the story is told from Earl's point of view. What you did with the last chapter lends so much emotion, it made me cry. READ THIS!

Yep, awesome.

This story has a great start, and i really want to see what's in store for this. So far, I love their characters so it would be great if you would continue it, I'm really looking forward to it!

Beautiful

This story is almost the epitome of a perfect story. The main character is perfectly crafted, with his own little flaws. Like everyone, the grammar and stuff can use work, but whatever. The writing style glows. If this were published, I would be first in line to buy a copy.

Amazing.

You read Seraphina, you read Wings of Fire, now look out world, here is the next great dragon series, Keepers of Equalidor!

I love how you added so many details to your story. the beginning alone had me hooked and me, being a massive dragon lover, I love the spin that this story took. a must read. like 99% of everybody, the spelling and grammar could use some work, but I think that this is off to a great start. I think you could maybe work on adding a little more emotion. if this were published, I would definitely buy it.

Could use some work

I think this has great potential as a story, and like you said it could use more feeling. the best thing for me is to just write. but I think you just need to find your muse

This Was Amazing

Just like the first book, this story was completely awesome. This one does not have quite as much raw emotion, but it was wonderful all the same. I really love how you intersperse Italian dialogue; it was a really interesting touch. Once again, I think the characters, the plot, the style, and the emotion were all perfect, but also once again, the grammar and stuff could use a lot of work. I'm really looking forward to more from this author and series!

Days of Blood and Roses

I think this was really good. I loved the characters and this fantasy world is a very interesting one. All things considered, the spelling and grammar and stuff had fairly few errors. The plot could use some tweaking, but overall, this was awesome.

An interesting fantasy.

I like the way the author introduces you to this world. The characters are interesting, and from what I know from before hand, I'm really excited for the rest of the story.

Wow

this story, even at it's very earliest stages, blew me away. this creates a wonderfully fabricated world, and great background for any fantasy lovers out there, and I mean fantasy of all categories, this is probably a must read.

Intriguing.

I want to see where this is going. still a very rough draft, but I don't care. the storyline seems like it could have a lot of potential.

Hleo

This grabbed my attention from the very beginning, and without even finishing the story, I knew this was going to an interesting story. I loved the plot. Like most books, the grammer and stuff could use a little work, but no big deal. And the style! wow! I wish I could write like that