Shawn Kwan

UK

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Beautifully tragic

Absolute perfection! A beautiful short story depicting a forbidden romance between polar opposites day and night. Tragic ending, but thereโ€™s always a light at the end of the tunnel for the lovers

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Love the story!

Absolute perfection! I loved the mystery, the backstory and the intensity of the story. I canโ€™t wait for more chapter updates! I also look forward to the relationship development of the main characters

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Intense!

Sorry it took a while, but I've just finished reading your story!

I really liked the chemistry between the main characters of the novel; the sarcastic banter and the flirting. I think in Chapter 3b: Big & Shiny Rejections, I couldn't quite follow the dialogues clearly. Felt a bit all over the place. Also, in Chapter 4: Ghostly Intruders and Concerned Friends, the second and third paragraphs could be spaced out a bit more.

But overall, interesting story with lots of tensions and chemistry between the main characters!

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