Silas Wolf

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Very good story and writing!

I'm quite into the story so far. Oragon seems like a very intriguing planted and I'm very interested on wanting to know more about it. The writing style is very well written in a way that makes reading through immersive, and I thought the journal and the language it was written a very cool idea. The characters are really well written out, they seem to each have their own, quirks, flaws and such.

Overall, I like this story and I recommend this to anyone, who wants a fresh fantasy story that's quite unique in its own way.

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Good Work.

Not something I'll typically read, though what I like about this story is the amounts of details you put into this to envision everything thats going on. As for the characters, you wrote them like they each have their own quirks, flaws and personalities, like the character Rose, like damn she's such a character from chapter 1. You're writing style is quite simple to follow on and any mistakes for spelling and grammar is seen as minor and doesn't distract from the story.

Overall you done a pretty good job and I recommend this to anyone who like anything to do with vampires and such. Keep up the writing! 👍🏻

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