Sis Ka

Hopeless romantic who believe in endless nights full of love and passion ❤️❤️ Rejected Alpha - published on iReader; click on the globe, next to the Facebook logo 😉

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Interesting

It was an interesting short read and I enjoyed it. I would suggest to work on the dialogues because sometimes it’s hard to know if they are talking or thinking. But other than that, it was okay 🤗😉 thank you for sharing ❤️

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Just read!

Fantastic read, amazing plot and a great writing style. Recommended for everyone who like romance along with some action. Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed it.

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Great!

You have very interesting story here :) and you did a perfect job with characters and surroundings. Your writing style is great.
Thank you for sharing 🙏❤️

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Nice work

I read only few chapters which you submitted so far but I can say I liked it :) your writing style is nice and you have great imagination. Also the plot is interesting.
Nice work and thank you for sharing :)

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Interesting

I am not for sci-fi stories but I enjoyed this one. It has interesting plot and nice written characters. Also, in general your writing style is very unique. And I like it.

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Great work

I read half of it and I enjoyed it so far :) so many different emotions are in this piece of work and I love it. Plot is interesting but for me little fast moving. Although, okay :)
Great work, thank you for nice experience with your book :)

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Nice work :)

I liked the story. Very interesting idea about time traveling;)
Nice writing style, easy to read and great visualization. What I didn’t like were her internal monologues and thing like “lol” and “wink,wink.” It made me think she is on drugs or something. It didn’t match the story for me. I understand she was all alone but this just didn’t add up.
But, beside that, nice work girl ;) keep it up :)

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Loved it!

First, I have to say, I love the name Zakai :) fell in love with it from the beginning.
And now, about the book. I don’t want to spoil anything so I will not write about the plot. I only say, 5stars :) that should be enough.
Great writing style, characters well built, clearly you know what you are doing ;)
I didn’t like the ending, but it was kind of where the story and main characters were going.
Still, great book and nice work done :) keep it up :)

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Great writing

I really enjoyed your writing, despite the fact that I’m missing some emotions in it. You have a unique style, yet I missed the part when this story became a thriller. After two chapters, as a reader, I was well aware of what was coming and I didn’t like it, because I love to be surprised or proven wrong. But, I read only the first few chapters, and the author has everything in her hands. She can still create an amazing, unique story even when she starts it slow. I’m willing to continue reading it. Hopefully I’ll be shocked at the end🤗. Thank you for sharing❤️

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Good read

I was a very interesting read. I love fantasy and it had every bit of it. Your action scenes are great, the main character’s struggle is perfectly described. You put a lot of work into this piece and it’s really good. It was a wonderful experience to read your book.
Thank you for sharing. ❤️

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Steamy romance

I stayed up all night to finish this story and after few first chapters I stopped posting my annoying comments 😂😂.
All and all, I enjoyed it. It has direct plot line, it’s focused on one main character, it’s not boring. Great job!
I’m a big fan of steamy things, and this piece has it plenty. Your writing is excellent, your vocabulary rich, only one thing got me out of a sex scenes and it’s a word phallus. I was like, what the heck? Good old c**k would be nicer for me, but okay 😂😂😂.
I put 4 stars for the plot because of Cadence. I wrote it in the comments and it stayed like it for the whole thing. The book is great, amazing actually, but I missed feelings in her. It was like she wanted a good looking guy with high social status but she didn’t care about love. I’m a romantic type, I need romance in a book like this. Eventually, she got what she wanted and yes, I’m real life, these things happen. But if I read a book, I want to experience weakness in main character’s knees, I want shivers and goosebumps. It had passion and great amount of sex, but with Mr.Forever, it should be much more than that.
Yet, it’s just my opinion and I recommend this book for everyone, who likes romance and personal tragedy 😬😬😬😂
Amazing job, thank you for sharing. ❤️❤️

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Nice work

Despite in time of writing this review, the story has only one chapter, it’s interesting and captivating. Your writing style is intriguing and I like the how you use words :)
It was great read, hopefully, I’ll have a chance to read more of it ❤️
Thank you for sharing ❤️❤️

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Unique

This review is based on the first 10 chapters of the book.
I like your writing style, it’s very descriptive but sometimes hard to follow. Yet, it was captivating so I can forgive the long paragraphs 😉 it’s just a suggestion to make it shorter.
The plot is unique and very interesting. It has a deeper meaning, and I really like the main idea of this story.
Toby is a relatable character but sometimes I had problem to connect with him. Maybe because I read it quickly and maybe I should read more.
Don’t worry, I’ll finish your book. It’s a very interesting piece and I’m looking forward to make it to the end ❤️ thank you for sharing

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Breathe

Amazing story in every way. Author has an incredible writing style. Complex, easy to read but also hard to copy.
I really liked that the main story line is focused only on one character. At least for now. You have a strong plot, great idea is unfolding in front of the reader’s eyes and it’s perfect that readers are not distracted by other events or some “teenage” love. Of course, it is there but the relationship between the characters is not so significant to take the main idea away.
I can see the work behind the plot, thinking and visualizing everything. Every detail perfectly set into it.
You’ve done an amazing job so far and I can’t wait to read the whole story 🤗

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Amazing 🤩

I can’t say how much I’m enjoying the story. For so many times, I was bored with lack of action but here, I can’t say one bad word.
Your writing style is amazing, and the way you are able to describe everything to the smallest detail is just perfect.
It’s a great work and I thank you for sharing it ❤️

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Interesting

It’s a review based on first four chapters which are available:)
Like the plot, it’s different and interesting. It captured me from the beginning and I want to know more.
But what I disliked was small amount of surroundings description and sometimes it was hard to tell who was speaking:) however it can be easily fixed together with punctuation errors :)
You started an interesting story, keep it up. I look forward for new chapters:)
Thank you for sharing ❤️🙏

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Whispers :)

You have amazing writing style. You did beautiful job with words, with expressing feelings and with descriptions of surroundings. Great.
It was just so confusing. Your choice of names, and the way you change them. When in the end it was the same person.
Sorry, I just can’t give you five stars for it. Maybe some description would help, because I was really struggling with understanding who was talking or who the main character was waiting for.
You are very talented. You know how to do magic with words.
Thank you for sharing 🙏❤️

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Great feelings ❤️

Loved it. So beautiful. I had goosebumps:) you are very talented.
Thank you for sharing 🙏❤️

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KINTSUkoroi

I read six chapters which are available for now and I really enjoyed it.
I would love to see more of the surroundings and also more of the main characters relationship when they were younger. I look forward to see what will happen between them.
Also, I love the analogy between the Human and the Giant. From what I can tell, is she going to safe him? Change him? Show him the better life?
I am really interested in how it all could end between them.
Considering, this should be a romance, they will probably fall in love with each other but could it work? 🤔 so many questions 🤗
Overall, you did a great job so far, keep it up. Thank you for sharing your work 🙏❤️

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Nice work

It was very entertaining. I really enjoyed the time I spent with this book. Great read :)

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Fated

Like the plot and main characters. English isn’t my first language too, so I understand your fight :D but you are doing great. Keep it up :)

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Very interesting

I’m not the one for sci-fi and aliens books, but I really like the plot of this one. Probably because I would never have guessed that vampires are aliens 😏😂 it’s really enjoyable read and I look forward to new chapters :) thank you for sharing:)

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Love it!

Amazing story, great plot and characters development:) thank you for sharing 🙏❤️

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Great!

Love the plot, the characters and the writing style:) great book :)

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Perfect !

Interesting story, nice writing style:) looking forward for the new chapters:)

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Love sexy books 😏

I just love reading these kind of books. I read so many of them that sometimes I’m bored with them, but not this time. Your book is spicy and plot is intriguing, so I wanted to read more. You have great writing style and you created interesting characters. You have one great book here, girl!
Thank you for sharing 🙏❤️.

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Nice start

Nice start of the book, I really look forward to next chapters :)

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Great work

Love the plot and writing style :) can’t wait for update :) also, the cover of the book is pretty great ❤️

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Great

Like the plot, looking forward for the update:)

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The Arena

Like the writing style. The plot is very interesting and I enjoyed the read :)
Thank you for sharing and I look forward to next chapter :)

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Nice work :)

I really enjoyed this one. Great plot and amazing writing skills. I could imagine all the stuff you wrote. Perfect!
Thank you for sharing:)

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Interesting

First chapter was interesting. I can’t say anything about the plot because it only get started. So I look forward to next chapters:)

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Great work!

I’m just in the middle of it and I can tell I like it :) it is enjoyable read. I would love to see some action, because half of it already and it’s been two days and one event in the book. But other then that, I am enjoying the romance :)
You have very specific writing style and sometimes I am overwhelmed by main character feelings, but I understand that many readers like it :)
All and all, great work and I look forward to read more :)

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Great :)

I really don’t want to spoil anything for readers, so I only say, it is amazing work, perfect plot, great surroundings, interesting writing style and special main characters:) I love it :)

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Interesting start

I read few chapters which you submitted and it is kind of interesting. Few things were confusing but it didn’t get me out of the story so I think, little editing and it will be okay :)
Nice work, keep it up :)

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Nice work :)

I am probably in the first quarter of the book and I can say I like it. It is different than other romantic books. I found myself feeling sorry for a poor girl. No one should be in her situation.
I understand that the secret love is main twist, but after few chapters, which are almost the same, about her crying over him, I was bored. For me, it needs a little more action. Something has to happen so I will continue to read.
I’ll give it a try and I’ll start new chapter hoping for something crazy from her. I really want her to get the guy :D

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Interesting story

I read about half of it and I find it curious in some way while in other, it was boring. Too much details which I wasn’t interested in, while on the other hand, main characters are written in totally opposite way.
Sometimes I was confused and other time, it was perfectly clear. And I couldn’t find out, why did you write it that way.
It is a good book, and I am sure, there are people who will think about it as amazing :) for me, it is nice work, but it needs a little editing touch :)

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Interesting

I like the plot and that you started the story in the middle of action :) it dragged me into it.
But what confused me was dialogues. Sometimes I really didn’t know who was talking. Maybe a little editing would help, play a little with paragraphs, because have it all in one piece is very confusing.
Other than that. It is nice work, thank you for sharing :)

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Die for love

Story itself is very intense, but sometimes confusing. For me, rape scene was horrible and I stopped reading it and continued on the other chapter.
I kind of liked the plot but I didn’t feel a connection to the characters. Maybe a little more dialogues between them would help.
All and all, it is worth to read. I think, there are readers who will enjoy it :)
Thank you for sharing:)

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Very interesting read

Interesting start of a book. And also, the idea and main plot are really something. I didn’t try that kind of book before and I am glad that I gave it a chance.
Your writing style is great but me personally, I would like to see more dialogues. There is too much information on one page, that made my head spin :)
But, great work :) thanks for sharing :)

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Interesting :)

I only read first chapter, but it was interesting. Maybe you could play a little with atmosphere, to make it more scary. Also, I found few errors, you should read it again and check it. It is third person POV but you have few sentences there writing in first person. :)
Keep up the good work :)

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Very powerful story

I was never one in gay romance. I don’t have anything against it I just never look for it. And I was surprised by the way it got under my skin.
I could literally feel the love, the connection between them. It was magical.
The end was heartbreaking. I don’t want to spoil it for anyone, so that’s all I could say.
I really recommend this book to everyone who wants to fall in love with characters and with a story itself.
And for you, dear author, I think you should post this into the contest. It is one which is currently ongoing on Inkitt, in romance category:) it could earn attention which this piece of work deserve :)
Thank you very much for sharing this ❤️

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Zen Huxley

So far so good. Like the plot. It is easy to read and it has nice flow. Will see what happens next :)

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The unexpected

I like the plot and the idea of the book. Both points of view sometimes show the same thing. I was little bored by it but eventually, it moved to the next level :)
Nice work, keep it up.

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A soldiers calling

I like the plot, the idea of the book is very interesting. I like military and stories from that environment are on top of my list :) it is slowly progressing but it is okay. I really enjoyed reading it.
Only thing which was for me very confusing were your long sentences. One paragraph was one sentence and it was eight lines, or rows. Hope you understand;) it is just too long and it happened to me for a few times, that I had forgot what I was reading about.
But other then that, you did a nice work, keep going :)

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Mystery of murder city

I like the idea of the book, plot is interesting but because of errors both in punctuation and grammar, it is hard to read.
Also, you use very long sentences. It is confusing. Maybe little work and editing could help :)
I understand that you are not native English and I admire your effort. Keep it up, work on yourself and it’ll pay off :) good luck.

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Like it so far :)

I read about 10 chapters and I really like it :) it is nice work. You have easy writing style and I enjoyed it so far.
I found myself smiling during my time with your book. It is different from the other books on this site and it is refreshing. Keep up the great work :)

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Love is in the air ❤️

I read the half of it and I am hooked :) it is so sweet :) I could literally feel Tristans struggle in the first chapter. Great work.
I would like the quicker pace of the story, because I found myself wandering if they fight to the end of their forever :) but other then that, I’m really enjoying it :)

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Interesting start

It is an interesting start of the story. But because it is just first chapter, I don’t know where the plot is heading.
You have a nice writing style and I look forward to read more from you :)
Surely, I will update my review after I will read more :)

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The Dutch’s Bottle

For now, I read first 6 chapters and I must say, I like it so far. Nice writing style which allows perfect visualization for the reader :)
Also, plot is great, gave me good vibes :)
I don’t like horror stories but this one is great and thrilling:) nice work done ✔️

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Interesting :)

Like the plot and characters:) the story is moving progressively and I wasn’t annoyed or bored by it, which is refreshing:)
Also writing style is nice and easy for undemanding readers :)
So far so good :)

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Like it :)

I read half of it and it is nice peace of work. Easy writing and good plot. Maybe little editing would help with spelling mistakes.
Other then that, I like it so far. Keep it up :)

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Interesting read

I enjoyed the read :) it was different like the super fantasy book I’ve read this week, and I liked it. Maybe, if it was a little longer, I understood characters better. Sometimes it felt like something is missing. But other than that, I really find it interesting:) nice work :)

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Xyanium

I love it :) and really enjoyed it. But for me, it was happening too fast.
Interesting plot and the first chapter was amazing :)
Keep up good work :) looking forward to next parts of the story.

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Nice work

Overall, I liked it. Mainly, the idea of short stories about the same book.
Writing style is nice and easy to understand.
With plot I am not so sure. Every story had its own storyline and sometimes I just thought it was too simple and obvious.
But other then that, it is nice work :)

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Great so far :)

Book is great. I really like it so far. Writing style is nice and simple. For me as not native English, it was very easy read :) plot is interesting and I love the way reader see what happened in the past and then what is going on in present.
Nice work, keep it up :)

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Great work :)

I read it in one day, that should say enough :) amazing characters and writing style is just awesome :)
I don’t want to spoil anything for anyone so I will only say, that it is vey good book and everyone who likes big battles and strong lead characters should read it :)

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Interesting read :)

Well, it is the very first horror book I’ve read so far and it was scary. Amazing but scary, because I pictured everything.
Readers, who love that kind of book would be very satisfied:)
For me, it was little too much with a girl but your writing style is great and keep going, for sure :) it is amazing story for horror lovers ;)

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Interesting

Well, I read it and I can tell, I like it :) from the beginning, I was little confused. I just couldn’t put it together, like something was missing. But when I continued, it became clear what was going on :)
I love the writing style. Every reader can see, that you are very capable of “playing” with words :)
It was very interesting experience to read that kind of book because it is not really my style. I am more romance type but I enjoyed it :)
Thank you for this and keep up the great work :)

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Nice so far

Because I read only first chapter(no more so far submitted), I can’t review the plot. So I just put 5 stars, because I like it :D.
It is well written and your sense for detail is amazing. Also, perfect visualization. I would like to see more dialogues but so far so good :)

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Amazing!

First, I love your writing style. It is amazing. I could literally picture everything you described.
Second, plot twist is also interesting. I really like these 2 chapters which I read so far, great.
And third, characters. Perfectly written and I look forward to next encounters :)

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