Slivergoddess

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Crane

I really love this story. Even though it's short there's still a lot of details. We get the main character's back round and everything. It describes a beautiful scene. I also like how we get references of the Crane. Amazing work.

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Very good

One of the best that I've read so far and I only read the first chapter. Thank you for not rushing the story instead giving us characters to like. My favorite character is Arlo because her and I are alike. We're street smart but not academic smart. I can't wait to read more of this book when I get the chance. 5 stars.

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Lovely story

I've only read it so far and I already like it. I'm not a big fan of romance stories but this one has caught my attention. Good job

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WOW

It takes a very talented writer to make a story perfect, interesting and captivating.You did just that!!!! And when you decided to put the readers themselves in the book. That was genius. Your description throughout the book is beautiful. I can actually see myself going fishing with my grandpa ( and I have never gone fishing with him). I love how you painted a picture for us and you describe these emotions. Wonderful work I can't wait to see more.

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Wow

Wow really great book 10/10. Love the storyline. The only thing I would say is the editing. Some of the words in your book doesn't have a space or your missing a few. Other than that please keep up the great work.

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Pretty good

The book is good. Like I said before it's hard to make books like these interesting but you did good. I like how you kept the readers hanging on that last chapter.

My most favorite character is the main character. Which you know A+ for giving us characters to like and dislike in the beginning chapters, well done. I like how she tries not to make stupid decisions. I do feel bad for her. I can tell she's going to be a powerful she-wolf later on.

My least favorite character is unfortunately Dio. I don't like how predatory he is with Ari and he tries to take advantage of her while she's in heat ( that's one of the reasons why I feel bad for her). And with her being so young it doesn't sit right with me. It doesn't make your book bad. Your book is still good. I just don't like him personally.

Overall good job.

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