KhankheilKhatttak

I like to write fast-paced, character-driven stories usually with sad endings. I hope you find my work interesting enough to take a look at it and leave a review.

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Interesting

(This review is based on a reading of the first six parts)

The plot is extremely interesting. It leaves us with enough at the end of each chapter to satisfy us but there's also an overarching mystery to it all that is peeled off bit by bit masterfully. The characters are well-rounded. The dialogue is meaningful and also contains crucial information to the story. The chapters are short as well which makes for a great reading.

Would highly recommend it to anyone looking for a gore-filled mystery with an interesting plot.

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Well written

(My review is based on a reading of the first four chapters)

The prose is amazing. It's simple yet does a great job in conveying the meaning. The characters are natural and their dialogue is the same. The plot moves with a steady pace but I believe from the ending of chapter four that some exciting and unexpected things are waiting for the reader. Overall, a great book that I would highly recommend to anyone who is looking for a light-hearted quick read.

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Amazing!

A great book with much to offer and even though I have only read a small portion of it (specifically the prologue, chapter 1 and chapter 2) it still does not hinder my ability to see its strengths. From its sophisticated language to the fluidity of the paragraphs, the prose is simply amazing. Quite possibly the greatest quality of it. The plot, though there is little for me to discuss, still retains a traditional structure and makes use of the multi-perspective extremely well. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and I would highly recommend it as well.

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