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Awesome

This book's plot was mysterious and downright awesome. I was so into what I was reading. I would recommend spacing out the paragraphs and trying to fix some grammar. Grammarly is really good. Overall, the detailed descriptions made this book super cool! Keep going, I want to read more!

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Everything was on point. I loved your book because it was not the traditional boy saves girl type of story. Each character had their own stuff to deal with and that made your story interesting. Loved it!

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The plot was very interesting and I ended up staying up to read this book instead of going to sleep since my exam was the next day lol. I loved Charlie as a character. Id be interested in having Charlie's POV. I think it would definitely add more depth to his character. Overall, I loved it!!

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I like that that you describe the surroundings very well. It paints a picture in my mind. What I noticed was that you skip directly to the action which is great but I feel like you should add more mini events that lead to the big event. Otherwise, its like youre listing a bunch of things that happened but have no relation. Establish connections and relations. You did really well with choosing a plotline. I cant wait to read more!!!

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Different

This book was different and seemed like the author enjoyed writing it. There were several grammar mistakes so it may feel odd to read through the book but the pros outweigh that minor detail. It was nice to read a book that didnt start out by moving too fast. The tones were definitely appropriate for each situation that the nain character was in. Overall, its worth reading!!

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Outstanding Work

This was an absolutely riveting piece of work. I'm not a fan of thrillers but dang, this was extremely well written and I'm impressed.

From sentence structure to plot, everything was awesome. I liked how you ended chapters with something to keep your readers engaged.

One piece of advice is maybe incorporating a little bit of humor. Sometimes shifting between tones adds more depth to the plot.

In any case, awesome work!

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