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It has a good plot and the storyline is also quite interesting. I loved how you have explained the sequences of dream and reality. The choice of words are also good. Some grammar mistakes here and there but that is how we all improve.
So far as I have read, it's a bit confusing as to what is happening and understanding the story is a bit difficult with the changing scenes frequently. Can't make out what is real and what is dream.
Overall it's a good book and I would definitely like to recommend it to people. It has kept me bind up till now. Can't stop reading it continuously. Keep it up! 🌼✨✨🌼

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