This story was definitely not something I was expecting when I saw that it took place in ancient Mongolia. It's not a genre that I'd usually stray towards when reading, but the beautiful writing, great insight into Gezte's thoughts, and engaging plot kept me hooked, and I ended up finishing in one sitting. It was a very well thought out story, and the world building was splendidly done. I was immediately pulled into Gezte's world. My only gripes are the occasional dialogue that seemed almost anachronistic in its wording, and the ending, which I thought was a little too rushed. Great job, and I look forward to reading more of your work!
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