Sissi

Hogwarts

Hi, I'm an awkward little thing, okay maybe not so little, but you get my point. penning as SOSimons & bookworming on the side || my book NLS is out now!

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A must read

A wonderful and unique plot with many twists and turns that surely assure for a very intriguing and suspenseful narration. It's not the usual werewolf book, because as the title hints it's about lycans, creatures we don't read about frequently. Furthermore I enjoyed the fact that there were different realms and creatures always well described.
I must say I devoured this book and will surely continue with the series.

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Very original

I'm not done reading the book yet but I loved it for now!
The plot is very original and it doesn't tend to be like the "classical" werewolf story, so it's like a fresh breath of air.
Your writing style is engaging too and I can't wait to go on with the story!

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A hidden spice gem

This is the second alien "series" I read and not my usual cup of tea. What can I say though, I wasn't disappointed.

The author's writing style is unique, and the way they created this fantasy world is to praise. Their description paints a beautiful image of the story that is easy to get immersed into. The two main characters' interactions develop at a perfect pace, and it was lovely to read about their journey.

Plus points for impeccable grammar and sentence structure.

A must read for all horny ;)

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Nice start!

I just finished reading and as of now, I'm enjoying the story.

There are some improving points though and things to pay attention to.
Tenses: you change tense from one paragraph to another throughout the chapters and it becomes hard to follow the story this way. Decide which tense you prefer more and stick to it.
There are some formatting bugs too, once or twice dialogues or descriptions are split in the middle of the sentence and continue in another paragraph. It isn't bad but, just a heads up :)
I noticed and felt that sometimes the behaviour and thoughts of the MCs didn't really match their age realistically. There were times where their train of thoughts was somehow too mature or childish, but there wasn't a character development that could have supported that yet.

This is perhaps a personal preference but I suggest adding the dates, like the year the scene is taking place at the beginning of the chapter. One can better follow the time jumps between chapters and be aware of the timeline that way.

Nonetheless, I like where the story is going for now, as well as the alternating POV divided by chapters. That way, it's easier to follow the narrative instead of having a change (or more) of POV in one single chapter.

Keep up the good work!

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Emotional and unique read

It's not the first book of yours I read and it won't be the last.
I absolutely liked the idea that the narration was through letters/journal entries but still could reveal a lot about the characters of the story. Their emotions were so well represented, described, they came to life while reading.
It was also a quite unique plot, emotional and well, with some surprises too.
A must read, especially when you feel like giving up.

P.s. I'm very surprised I could hold my emotions in check

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Time for the long merited review

I've read this book in less than 3 hours when I started it and every time I get the update notification I can't help but get excited.

The plot is surely one of a kind. I've never read anything even similar to this before. Although it might catch some people off guard at the beginning, the plot surely develops at the right pace with some twists and turns and a lot of love, affection between the characters that are still portrayed with their flaws. It's not something you can always find. Everything is balanced.

It's surely a must read for adventurous readers that want to find something refreshing and new.

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I couldn't stop reading

First of all the plot of this book is very original and breathtaking.
I absolutely love how you portrayed Serilda's emotions, her fu*ked-up life and everything that happened to her. There are some typos and little grammar errors here and there but I think that by re-reading the chapters it wouldn't be difficult to find them.

I had to study for my test today but I couldn't stop reading this book because it fascinating me and I really felt inside the story. I'm very eager to read on and see what happens next. Fingers crossed for a happy ending =)

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Amazing work

I really like your writing style and how you can make your charcters seem so real. This is the first book of yours I ever read and I must say that even if it's a kind of "spin-off" of another of your works I found it very easy to connect with the charcters. The plot is getting more interesting with each chapter and I can't wait to read more!
Obviously this book isn't for everyone because of the hard themes treated (BDSM, degradation etc.) but if you don't mind then it's something to enjoy fully.

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